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burnt out

current girlfriend problems
the dead one is far better 
than the live one
if it were'nt for lying lips
i think i could do better
but one of those lies 
just happen to be
i love you

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  1. Date: 9/4/2012 4:39:00 PM
    Sad when one gives that lie..Interesting work penned..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 8:52:00 PM
    aw... so is life I suppose. I like this poem. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 12:34:00 PM
    Make the best out of everyday and yes life can sometimes be crazy. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 9:32:00 AM
    Don't ever burn out John; you take what is happening and make magic out of it. Love your poetry and this rates high! 7 for sure

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 6:49:00 PM
    omg that was so real I kaughed out loud, not that it was funny but more so because it sounded like an echo comming from the walls herein my own house.

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 6:22:00 PM are being too honest,lol:=) Its a crazy world,and it gets even worse when true nature gets exposed..! You gave me something to ponder about here,John.Have a great Saturday.Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 10:00:00 AM
    wow...kind of mean..but, honest..pd

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 5:34:00 PM
    You can dress up love in many shades but when it reveals it's true nature, it is as see through as rain, thank you for sharing your beautiful heart, hugs, vie