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Burnt Out

current girlfriend problems the dead one is far better than the live one if it were'nt for lying lips i think i could do better but one of those lies just happen to be i love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/4/2012 4:39:00 PM
Sad when one gives that lie..Interesting work penned..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/7/2012 8:52:00 PM
aw... so is life I suppose. I like this poem. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/5/2012 12:34:00 PM
Make the best out of everyday and yes life can sometimes be crazy. love phyl
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Date: 3/27/2012 9:32:00 AM
Don't ever burn out John; you take what is happening and make magic out of it. Love your poetry and this rates high! 7 for sure
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Date: 3/18/2012 6:49:00 PM
omg that was so real I kaughed out loud, not that it was funny but more so because it sounded like an echo comming from the walls herein my own house.
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Date: 3/16/2012 10:00:00 AM
wow...kind of mean..but, honest..pd
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