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Burning Passion

Burning passion Passion in heart burns, Throe follows the last supper, Invisible fumes ! Haiku- 5/7/5 Written September 22nd, 2014 For contest 'Creative haiku' by Charlotte Puddifoo

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/23/2014 4:43:00 PM

Very creative and excellent haiku, Upma. In my eyes it flies high! // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/23/2014 4:03:00 PM

Nicely done Haiku Dr. Sharma.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2014 11:39:00 PM

gosh you are on a passion streak!!! Hope this one does well too, dear.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/22/2014 9:28:00 AM

love the image and the last phrase... :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/22/2014 9:04:00 AM

creative one and should rank high in the contest, Dr. Upma

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/22/2014 4:26:00 AM

Invisible fumes, indeed, that our whole being consume! Fantastic writing coming out of deep knowledge, Dr. Upma. Very dynamic, a seven! Good luck!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/22/2014 4:28:00 AM

Thnx Demetrios my good friend! glad to hv ur visit n a super score!