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Burning Image

Burning image Formed by a raging fire… A face appears
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/22/2014 2:28:00 PM
Reminds me of Moses meeting God at the burning bush on top of Mt. Sinai. Good senryu.
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Date: 1/13/2014 8:56:00 PM
wow, this is very deep.. Russell, impressive open image on the fire walls... Linda
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Date: 12/24/2013 2:21:00 PM
quite the image to you and your family have a beautiful love filled christmas and a joyful new year
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Date: 12/23/2013 9:43:00 PM
very cool senryu. It reminds me of Shadrack and Abendigo or something (can't think how to spell their names!!)
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Date: 12/23/2013 10:21:00 PM
I believe it is: shadrach meshach and abednego. At least that is what my search says.
Date: 12/23/2013 12:48:00 PM
Whoa!! This one is an eye opener..Thanks for the visits..I haven't got one that I am happy with the way it turned out yet..I need to do some more work to get one that I like for the contest..Sara
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Date: 12/22/2013 11:40:00 PM
You have said a lot with so little.
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Date: 12/22/2013 9:22:00 PM
Wow...so true.....sitting around the fire ring outside in my yard sometimes I become mesmerized...
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Date: 12/22/2013 4:46:00 PM
wow, awesome
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Date: 12/22/2013 1:38:00 PM
My friend Russell, this is great inspiring writing. Love it!
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Date: 12/22/2013 1:35:00 PM
Russell sound like the picture of evil. Great write.
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Date: 12/22/2013 12:38:00 PM
- Well written, Russell! - I wish you and your loved ones a nice Christmas - I hope the year 2014 will be a peaceful year. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/22/2013 9:44:00 AM
Brilliant idea on this excellent senryu of yours my dear friend. So creative as always! Thank u so much for sharing! I'll be back hopefully tomorrow to read more of your poems . Advance Merry merry Christmas to you and your love ones and a happy/prosperous New Year to come! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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