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Burning Daylight

I’m burning daylight on a warm spring day, Admiring in the park a bright array Of peonies and pansies when I spy Pirouetting round them, a butterfly. How beautiful this outdoor noon ballet! We’re sweltering; I take the hose and spray My grand kids, shrieking in their summer play, Just one of many other ways whereby I’m burning daylight! With friends I’m sitting at a street café. We’re laughing chattering our time away. While sun ekes out the last drops from fall’s sky, I see the dusk, a pink parfait, and sigh! A chill is coming, which I must delay. . . I’m burning daylight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/7/2015 9:57:00 AM
Nice one as the sun slowly sinks out of the sky. Keeping my comments short today. love phyl
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Date: 5/30/2015 10:07:00 AM
I love the line "While sun ekes out the last drops from fall’s sky". Beautiful imagery
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Date: 5/25/2015 5:34:00 PM
Andre, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 5/25/2015 1:23:00 AM
Andrea, Congrats on your BURNING DAYLIGHT win. SKAT
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:23:00 PM
Andrea, lovely reminder that burning daylight can be an enjoyable endeavor. I find that judging the contests makes me look more intently at the forms that are used....and learn new and exciting things about.....of all things....POETRY. Thanks for your participation in the contest.
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:21:00 PM
Andrea....how lovely....loved it....Congratulations....
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Date: 5/10/2015 3:58:00 PM
Glad that you got to burn all the daylight that you could at the approach of winter's gray..Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 5/10/2015 4:07:00 AM
How wonderful!! This is a new form too!! All the best for the contest!! :D
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Sneha Rv
Date: 5/10/2015 4:13:00 AM
P.S - What exactly does the sponsor mean by 'Burning daylight'? I din't get it - Thought of something else! HEHE!!
Date: 5/9/2015 6:15:00 PM
I love this light hearted inspiring poem Andrea. Wow, how differently this phrase can be interpreted. Great write! 7
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Date: 5/8/2015 7:26:00 AM
Such imagery, it's so delightful. Your love of the seasons shines through.
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Date: 5/7/2015 7:14:00 PM
the imagery is stunning Andrea I can see it so clearly fantastic pen hugs 7
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Date: 5/7/2015 11:31:00 AM
SOUPIE!
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Date: 5/7/2015 8:34:00 AM
Fantastic images. Me, I wait eagerly for the chill when the sun goes down to get out of the heat.
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Date: 5/7/2015 1:25:00 AM
Excellent and wonderful imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 5/7/2015 12:02:00 AM
Andrea, splendid and magical writing, enchanting 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Date: 5/6/2015 1:16:00 PM
I like the spring chill you put in. That's the way I feel too about spring. Love, Dave
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Date: 5/6/2015 11:44:00 AM
well, well.. this is life in its most relaxed way, andie.. love your groovin' beat!,, am still struggling with TPS errors!,, how are you?.. thanks for appreciating my trochee.. huggs!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/6/2015 4:24:00 PM
SOUPIE!
Date: 5/6/2015 3:41:00 AM
Your burning daylight is amazing! :)
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Date: 5/5/2015 8:43:00 PM
Delightful. Could picture this warm spring day you describe so beautifully. #7
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Date: 5/5/2015 6:42:00 PM
You chose a difficult form and created feelings of joy and nostalgia. Beautiful, Andrea! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 5/5/2015 6:41:00 PM
Burning Daylight? It's more like you're etching that poem in stone! FANTASTIC
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Date: 5/5/2015 4:36:00 PM
Spring has finally arrived - and none too soon! You tell a nice tale of a spring day in this work I just had a poem published in the New York Times. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/5/2015 12:53:00 PM
A wonderful, light-hearted, cheerful write! Andrea, this was a pleasure to read! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/5/2015 10:53:00 AM
Burn the daylight while you can Andrea... The warm months fly by .
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Date: 5/5/2015 10:26:00 AM
what wonderful imagery Andrea makes me wish i was out there enjoying the fun rather than stuck inside on yet another rainy day in the UK:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx Good luck in the contest
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