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Bubble Bath

Sittin' in the bath tub, it's just me and you; Talkin' about the day we had, that's what we like to do "BLOOP! BLOOP! BLOOP!" bubbles ripple through the air; "Sorry honey, I cut the cheese!" "Come back, let's be fair!" Sittin' in the bath tub, my spirit's lost its tone; Guess I'll read the paper, looks like I'm all alone!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/27/2012 8:16:00 PM
that was nice
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Date: 1/27/2012 7:47:00 PM
lol..2 cute :)
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Date: 1/26/2012 12:10:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I don't blame her for not getting back into the tub with you.
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Date: 1/24/2012 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Milton. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2012 7:22:00 PM
I can't believe it took over 3 years for this to be featured. Congrats Milton. Like Redd Foxx said, the reason it has an odor is so the deaf can enjoy it. Gotta love it. Vince
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Date: 9/13/2009 6:26:00 PM
you blew her away!! she's not in Kansas any more.
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Date: 1/26/2009 11:34:00 AM
Another poem that had me grinning from ear to ear. Hope all is well with you and I wish you and your loved one's a Happy 2009! Peace always, John
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Date: 12/4/2008 5:35:00 PM
This was hillarious. Vince
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Date: 11/29/2008 2:00:00 PM
You are a good. Simply awesome!
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Date: 11/4/2008 5:52:00 AM
Oh good grief! Your wife must be in hysterics on a daily basis! You are certainly on a roll Milt. Hope you keep em coming! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/4/2008 1:25:00 AM
Air, air , Milton .... Clever piece ... reminds me of the original author of " Bubbles In The Bath "" ... Mr.Wynn D Bottom .....
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