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Hello Soupers, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I am back home with the SOUPERS I LOVE.. To those of YOU who have not read this before, YOU can read each line vertically or the Left side first than the Right side. Thank-YOU LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

.................. L I L O Y F Y V M H E M G E F O R E V E R E T E R N A L L E N O R E L E N O R E E N T W I N E D E N T W I N E D Always with my HearT I Always with true Feeling Love You, my Dearest WIFE ALWAYS with Emotions My Love grows like an oak My Heart beats for YOU Mighty and E v e r l a s t I n g MY TEARS are Real YOU are M Y STRENGTH Yet My Heart still Aches FOR YOU LIVE in ME Though You live with GOD ETERNAL B L I S S YOU wear the gown of Angels INFINITE P U R E YOU carry my Heart in Yours You grow in my heart EACH and EVERY Day The LOVE grows and I am at Peace KNOWING As LOVE Grows In my BROKEN Heart Constantly Knitting cracks and Fissures My Dearest Beloved Tenderly Mended Repairing Loneliness My Wife Lenore Angelically Smiles Eternally Loved MY Only Most B E L O V E D L I F E L E N O R E Always F O R E V E R YOU My Heartbeat Are My S O U L MY W I F E One Breath N e v e r Alone YOU And I

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/27/2016 7:41:00 AM

Beautiful shape poem. You love for Lenore is eternal.

Funom Makama

Date: 3/2/2016 8:44:00 AM

What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 6:30:00 PM

Hi Daniel,, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2015 12:15:00 PM

the sweetest thing i've read today:), very much enjoyed this one

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2015 3:49:00 PM

Wow! This is truly romantic, both in content and presentation! A broken heart, showing the split caused by her passing away...yet whole in loving spirit....a love that will never end. ~ All the best. // paul

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 9/1/2015 7:52:00 PM

Dear Paul, Thank-YOU very much and Yes it is a LOVE that will continue for the EONS of FOREVER. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege ...HG

Eve Roper

Date: 8/16/2015 7:03:00 PM

Such a beautiful poem and the shape is creative. a 7 hugs Eve

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 9/1/2015 7:58:00 PM

Dear Eve, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment. I also have an Hour Glass shape POEM about Lenore. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/15/2015 7:52:00 AM

This takes some effort to read but that adds to the experience. This is literally the best shape poem that I have read. I hope your wife has not passed if he has please except my condolences. Better to have a broken heart than to have never experienced such an abiding love. I see at the end you are both still joined.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 8/30/2015 9:50:00 PM

Dear Richard, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. My Wife, My Heartbeat, My Life, LENORE went home to GLORY 44 years ago August 25th. Thank-YOU for YOUR Condolences. Most of my POEMS are about LENORE. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

James Horn

Date: 8/13/2015 7:54:00 AM

This could represent two feet as well as a heart indicating you both are going on same paths and also love each other so much. Jim Horn.

James Peranteau

Date: 8/12/2015 11:32:00 PM

Wow ! This tops all concrete that I've read dear poet ! What a lover you are my friend ! God bless you....have a wonderful week sir...much love, james

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/12/2015 12:44:00 AM

This is outstanding!!!Always, Laura

Jan Allison

Date: 7/31/2015 5:35:00 PM

WOW WOW -HG this is truly a heartbreaking write - the concrete form is simply perfect - Lenore will forever be in your heart :-) hugs Jan xx