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Broken Nest

Broken nest of birds Floating in the air as clouds I sit at the door With your blue shadow in eyes You told you'd come with the rains ____________________________________ August 4, 2016

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Date: 8/4/2016 1:08:00 PM
ohh, this is amazing, probir... love your expressive tanka!..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/5/2016 12:42:00 AM
Thank you nette ...
Date: 8/4/2016 11:17:00 AM
Lovely tanka, really lovely:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/5/2016 12:43:00 AM
Thank you Jo ...
Date: 8/4/2016 7:34:00 AM
Tenderly romantic my friend, Probir!
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