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Broken Monoku

Mountains flow tears As spring snows dissipate 11.30.2014 Contest: One Broken Monoku

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Date: 12/1/2014 3:45:00 PM
Nice short poem - and I liked the image you posted with it a lot. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/1/2014 8:04:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios
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Date: 12/1/2014 5:00:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful, dear Brenda, Good luck!
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Date: 11/30/2014 4:42:00 PM
So few words, so much imagery captured, Brenda. Hugs, Sandra
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/30/2014 6:25:00 PM
Thank you Sandra.
Date: 11/30/2014 4:19:00 PM
Beautiful Brenda
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/30/2014 6:24:00 PM
Thanks David.
Date: 11/30/2014 1:25:00 PM
wonderful image and stunning imagery - good luck Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/30/2014 6:22:00 PM
Thank you Jan.

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