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Briar and the Dragonfly

Briar and the Dragonfly Seated in a saddle on a dragonfly in flight Shimmering upon the evening skies Iridescent flickerings beneath this moonlit night Magical this scene before my eyes Smiling like a crescent with a firefly in tow Laughing as the trees have come to play Eyes they glow illumined as the springtime breezes flow Shining like a diamond on display “Hey there on the ground”, she hollers as she passes by “How’d you like to join me on my trek?” Reaching out a hand I see her beauty makes me try Hopping on I utter, “what the heck?” Through a blooming garden I hold tightly as we soar Daffodils and rose buds sing their song Irises are waving, tell me who could ask for more Happy that I chose to tag along She said, “My name is Briar and my dragonfly’s is Bliss” “Inspire me, he does most every day” I answered, “Please to meet you and my friends all call me Chris” “I really do enjoy this, I must say” Through a maze of hedges, like a sea of feathered green Underneath an arbor made of wood Woven tight with Jasmine, aromatic and pristine Many are the years this place it stood We flew above the water seeing ripples in a curve My grin reflects the surface smooth as glass Around the bend a cat tail that we miss now as we swerve Enchanted as these moments come to pass Then I heard a ringing so annoying and so loud Startled, my alarm clock it did scream Opening my weary eyes, a hazy kind of shroud Knowing now that this was all a dream Now I lay here frowning with her picture in my mind Hopping that the day will hurry by So it will be nighttime and another chance to find Briar and her friend the dragonfly Good night Soupers

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Date: 7/11/2017 11:53:00 AM
A wonderful, creative story poem, with great rhyme and flow. You have such a great gift for writing my friend. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/11/2017 12:03:00 PM
Thank you Lenna. Oh I'm sure once your leisure time is through, your pen will be non-stop again. At least I hope so. :)
Date: 7/6/2017 9:03:00 AM
I would be pretty disappointed too at finding it to be a dream. What a fun and creative write Chris.I bet you can't wait to go on that trip again. Loved it, it brought back such sweet memories...Maria
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Chris Green
Date: 7/6/2017 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Maria, so very much. These journeys are always fun and something to look forward too. :)
Date: 7/6/2017 7:29:00 AM
Aww, what a lovely tale that is :) You're a master story teller, you have such a vivid imagination, and all in rhyme... sigh... I LOVE it.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/6/2017 10:21:00 AM
Thank you so very much Darren. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 7/6/2017 1:46:00 AM
What an amazing dream narrated in such a fine language my friend, Chris. So absorbing!
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Chris Green
Date: 7/6/2017 10:21:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend for your nice thoughts
Date: 7/5/2017 11:38:00 PM
What a beautiful dream to be in, Chris! So glad I could journey along with you:)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/6/2017 10:20:00 AM
I am happy you came along too Jo, you made it so much more fun. :) Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 7/5/2017 9:43:00 PM
I LOVE this story! <3 <3 <3 :D Sleep and dream well, my friend :)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/6/2017 10:20:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sara. Your kind words are always a wonderful gift for me.
Date: 7/5/2017 9:08:00 PM
A wonderful story Chris, well penned...
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Chris Green
Date: 7/6/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thanks a bunch Joseph.
Date: 7/5/2017 7:00:00 PM
Wild dreams that come onto the scene..Interesting work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Chris Green
Date: 7/6/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thanks so very much Sara.
Date: 7/5/2017 6:31:00 PM
I won't accept that it was a dream.... You are sooooooooo talented! Sweet dreams.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/6/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. Ok, I won't tell if you won't. :)
Date: 7/5/2017 6:21:00 PM
Now that was a beautiful flight to take. Fun! Good thing you dodged that cat tail...:) Great creative write Chris, good night.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/6/2017 10:18:00 AM
I know, it was menacing. :) Thanks so very much my friend for your kindness always.
Date: 7/5/2017 6:19:00 PM
AWESOME!! I hate waking up and being so profoundly disappointed that it was all a dream. Amazing write! Fave.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/6/2017 10:18:00 AM
Thanks so much Dale. I am happy you liked it.

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