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Breeze

Breeze, my irrepressible desire, would Become For Once, your unapproachable dream figure To embrace! © Demetrios Trifiatis 10 NOVEMBER 2014

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/12/2014 12:51:00 PM

Ultimate Romance. This is just such a beautiful write. It uplifts the spirit. Fav!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/18/2014 10:19:00 AM

Thank you, Maurice, for your uplifting comment!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/10/2014 1:03:00 PM

You're always so good at this Demetrios. Very creative and kind of humorous. Lol..Enjoyed my visit with you today my dear friend. :) love and hugs! xxxx D

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/11/2014 7:11:00 AM

Thank you my good friend, Dorian, for your heartfelt comment! Love and hugs to you too!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/10/2014 9:39:00 AM

You laugh at what you wrote below to Richard but I think for us at poetry soup it would be very fitting to see that on your tomb stone.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/10/2014 10:48:00 AM

If that is the case meine freudin, Brenda, I shouldn't miss... the opportunity offered! Thank you for visiting!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/10/2014 8:35:00 AM

I also appreciate your sense of humor Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/10/2014 10:49:00 AM

Merci mon ami, Richard!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/10/2014 3:02:00 AM

Breezes of desire-Romantic and Sensual!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/10/2014 4:30:00 AM

Only a romantic heart could appreciate it, dear Charmaine! Thank you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/10/2014 1:42:00 AM

Romance dances along your page Demetrious. You posses a youthful heart imbued with an ageless wisdom.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/10/2014 4:20:00 AM

I love your comment my good friend, Richard, especially the second part that I would love to have it inscribed on my tomb stone: " Here lies Demetrios, a man of youthful heart imbued with an ageless wisdom." Unless, of course, you come up with something even better! Ha-ha! That is the way I feel my friend, concerning my heart, but I have a lot of trouble to convince her when she sees me in the mirror! Thank you so much!