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Beauty walked six feet tall and slender into the store where I was working one day. Raptly I watched him as he sauntered down aisles until his deep Engaging eyes of chocolate satin met my reverencing gaze. Then An alluring smile appeared on his finely chiseled face; Adonis had graced my life! Trembling inside my skin, I nearly gasped, for Happiness danced in my heart. He was the harbinger of my 17th birthday’s delight, Teasing me with those dark tempting eyes as he strolled over to my counter and Arousing my romantic hope with every step that drew him closer to me. Keeping my wits, I took a deep breath, for I was Intoxicated by my sweet imaginings. Night was nearing. Though I did not know it yet, Great gladness was in my grasp; a kindred spirit I would soon embrace! Written March 9, 2016 for the Breathtaking Acrostic Poetry Contest of John Hamilton

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Date: 3/16/2016 9:46:00 PM
G'day Andrea ... I do enjoy your trips down memory lane. Thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 3/15/2016 6:01:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2016 12:09:00 PM
Congrats all round Andrea, wonderful acrostic.
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Date: 3/14/2016 9:23:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your win and fine entry! John
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Date: 3/13/2016 12:45:00 PM
Andrea, a wonderful acrostic, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/13/2016 4:45:00 AM
What a wonderful encounter Andrea. Cherished moments that are never forgotten but live inside our hearts forever.
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Date: 3/12/2016 4:50:00 PM
ohhh how romantic Andrea such a vivid descriptive write :-) good luck in the contest:-) a very well deserved 7:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/12/2016 5:16:00 AM
Andrea, this is truly breathtaking and heart stopping and breathless and well quite wonderful, loving it 7 ~
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Date: 3/11/2016 7:38:00 PM
I have memories doing an Acrostic poem many years ago... Think it was for some holiday back in grade school!
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Date: 3/11/2016 6:05:00 PM
Wonderful acrostic my lovely friend. How romance takes its home in heart beautifully expressed and how love intoxicates also. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 3/11/2016 2:42:00 PM
So so sweet and beautiful dearest Andrea...
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Date: 3/11/2016 2:07:00 PM
Oh Yes: you bring back those days when romance was a dream to be lived. You really aced this theme, GL and big hugs, SuZ
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Date: 3/11/2016 10:25:00 AM
I know this feeling, remember it freezing me where I stood! I enjoyed your Acrostic very much. There are some very good ones in this competition. I think ALL can relate to yours, and ALL will enjoy it as much as I did. All the best, all the time ... CayCay
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Date: 3/11/2016 8:19:00 AM
How tender and sweet dear Andrea! Truly breathtaking! Good luck!
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Date: 3/11/2016 6:30:00 AM
Andrea, you capture that giddy girl feeling wonderfully in this enchanting acrostic. I know this will score high. ; )
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Date: 3/10/2016 11:52:00 PM
Nice acrostic - let me know what you think of my latest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/10/2016 9:11:00 PM
17! Shame on you. LOL Really enjoyed the read, Andrea. Was it a 7-11? Maybe I ought to go to the store? Peace to you and your family:)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/11/2016 2:17:00 AM
no shame in love at first sight! yes, you are close. It was a place called Stop and Go and later it transformed into a 7/11, after I had left town and gone away to college. I actually got robbed at that store when I was 16!!
Date: 3/10/2016 8:37:00 PM
Oooh Andrea...very passionate write
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