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Breath of Autumn

You can feel the breath of fall as she blows cold air across the plain she whispers to the sun asking it to shine a few more weeks while she gathers the bountiful yield bringing closure to the seasons warmth night temperatures begin to plummet her breathing becomes raspy as coldness encases her labored breathing ceases with a final breath she brings forth winters frost. 08/01/16

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Date: 3/4/2016 8:10:00 PM
another one for personification. love this one too, dear.
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:55:00 AM
Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/19/2016 1:02:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. love phyl
Date: 1/8/2016 8:55:00 PM
Hello Phyllis... a nicely written prelude to winter's chill. While we swelter you seek shelter at this time of the year - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/12/2016 1:40:00 PM
Thanks my friend. Yes we are in the middle of winter and into a cold spell at the moment. love phyl
Date: 1/8/2016 4:20:00 PM
Phyllis, so beautifully penned, I love this 7
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/12/2016 1:41:00 PM
Thanks Constance. Nice and cold at the moment here on the prairies. love phyl
Date: 1/8/2016 3:27:00 PM
- That's me !!!! : "Asking it two shine a few more weeks" :) - Winter is too cold - A wistful and wonderful poems, dear Phyllis (7) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/12/2016 1:43:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise. Still down with this flu so back to the doc tomorrow. 5 weeks and is getting me down so looking to get rid of winter.
Date: 1/8/2016 3:26:00 PM
I adore autumn ... wonderful personification Phyllis:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/12/2016 1:46:00 PM
type this again as it seemed to get lost somewhere so if you get it twice you will know why. Thanks for your comment. love phyl

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