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Brace For Impact

We were off,
off for a much needed vacation.
Laughter and music filled he car,
as the miles just seemed to disappear.
The weather was turning gloomy,
it was getting much cooler.
Sleet and snow now was starting,
the ground was looking like it had been sprinkled with powered sugar.
The tires could feel the slippy payment,
traffic was getting heavier.
The radio said a storm was coming,
get off the highways.
We could not get off,
our hotel was still a long way off.
As I looked far ahead,
all I could see were red lights.
I thought~what could that be,
Oh no~ it was a sea of bright red brake lights,
That means they are slowing down or are stopped,
was I going to need to stop but where.
We were all driving way too fast to stop,
accident flashed before me.
I only had a few seconds to decide what to do.
I was in the left lane,
I saw a flat grass area coming up.
Should I ease off the payment and onto the grass,
would I spin out.
I grabbed the wheel tight,
I Braced For The Impact.
Then went for it,
off onto the grass we went.
The kids in the backseat were asleep,
until they hit the floor.
My husband awoke as I was heading for the grass,
thinking I was sleeping he started yelling.
I then saw the cars in back of me,
following me down the snowy grass.
They knew what I knew,
we could not stop on the highway.
Down the snowy grass I finally stopped,
I had taken many cars to safety.
What a way to start our vacation,
the ride home was uneventful.
Date Written: 5/30/2022
4 Place
Brace For Impact
This or That, Vol 12 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 7/5/2022 7:48:00 AM
Such an epic my dear friend. Your guardian angel hugged you and gave you courage. A great story to read. Congratulations on your win and this wonderful poem! Thanks a lot for sharing!Blessings to you. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2022 10:55:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Yes, our guardian angels were working overtime this day. Have a great/blessed day writing away............
Date: 7/2/2022 6:03:00 PM
A wonderful narrative poem, Paula:-) You take the reader along with you! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2022 12:00:00 PM
Thank You, for your note, kind words and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your contest. This is a "True Story" write. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away............
Date: 7/2/2022 11:13:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats, Paula. Your poem feels so true and real. Well done, indeed!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/2/2022 12:57:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with this "True Story" write. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend writing away............
Date: 7/2/2022 7:51:00 AM
Paula, you deserve congratulations on your excellent win. You penned such a stunning Poem. Have a lovely weekend.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/2/2022 12:56:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with this "true story." Have a lovely/blessed weekend writing away............
Date: 6/3/2022 10:12:00 PM
Paula, this sounds so realistic . Glad you escaped with out even a scratch. You saved many lives too.... so heroic ! All the Best, sweet friend !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/5/2022 9:08:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Have a great/blessed day writing away............
Date: 6/3/2022 7:01:00 AM
Very pleased you all escaped....Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/3/2022 9:03:00 AM
Thanks for your note. All escaped and were fine. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 6/2/2022 8:02:00 AM
Paula, plain old being in a car, even being a passenger on way to shop scares me. Going in bad weather, I can barely stand. I’ve been through what you well describe here. SCARY! Living video narrative. xox Blessings!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/2/2022 9:02:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Winter is a hard time for many. Snow/ice can both be bad. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 6/1/2022 12:40:00 PM
Great, God is good. You were the better driver ... But livedclastbline, too. Shalom shalom Paula
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/2/2022 9:01:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Yes, God is Great. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 5/31/2022 3:40:00 PM
I, have been in a similar situation, but not so dramatic. I did hit another car. But barely...just skidded on the ice. Then, boom. PS a fabulous write! Panagiota
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/1/2022 7:37:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Snow is better than ice. Yet both can be bad. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 5/30/2022 2:12:00 PM
Oh my, this was quite a situation; not much else to do but head for the grass. Good decision. I hope the rest of vacation went much better.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/31/2022 8:39:00 AM
Thanks for your note. The grass was the only place to go. Have a great/blessed day.............
Date: 5/30/2022 9:36:00 AM
A frightening experience Paula, winter driving is scary at the best of times. Tom
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/31/2022 8:38:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Yes, winter driving can be very scary. Have a great/blessed day.............

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