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Bob

Bob, a poor boy that has nothing; will not bow down to any king Dad, his Lady, and old Nana too; do not know what Bob can do With a strong faith, Bob walks blindly; a path of Divinity finally Bringing a poor boy to a giant hill, on top a big bright void to fill God and only Son, Christ, cry; as BOB is watching and slowly walking by Looking back, thinking "Shall I ?" Inspired by Nikko Palmario's Contest " Life without U & Me "

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Date: 7/8/2010 8:41:00 PM
Congrats on being featured! Rhonda Hero
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup HG my forever friend. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 7/5/2010 12:04:00 PM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! Keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/5/2010 11:33:00 AM
Congrats HG on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
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Date: 7/5/2010 7:42:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature and win in the contest. Rgds Janette
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Date: 7/4/2010 7:36:00 PM
A contest win and a featured poem for this one. Wow! You must be pleased. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/3/2010 8:33:00 PM
great job with no ume's!!
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Date: 7/3/2010 3:37:00 PM
A big congrats on your win, HG. This is a very inspiring write and well deserving of recognition. Have a wonderful holday weekend! I'm coming to NH on July 20! Hope the weather will be a little cooler there. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:52:00 PM
HG, I knew it, I knew it..HGs a winner..congrats my dear one. BG
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Date: 7/3/2010 9:27:00 AM
Beautiful poetry! Congrats on your win in the contest! Dan C
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:32:00 PM
Congratulations, HG. HOpe you are doing fine for this July 4 weekend!
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:28:00 AM
Wonderful poem HG, this was quite a challenge and you have captured it well. Many congratulations on your win >> James
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Date: 7/2/2010 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations HG on your fabulous poem being in the spotlight in Nikko Palmario's contest "Life without U & Me". It sure was a challenge. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/2/2010 8:57:00 AM
Amazing poem, so full of faith and doubt! Congrat's on your win, you deffinately deserve it!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/2/2010 8:33:00 AM
Keep that faith shining. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Nikko's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 7/2/2010 8:29:00 AM
Hi HG! Super glad you made the corrections on time with this thought-provoking write :) hoping that Bob did the right thing---congrats again! --nikko :)
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Date: 7/2/2010 7:44:00 AM
Congrats HG on your winning poem in Nikko's great contest with this wonderful write and win without the letters m e and u as only my silent beau can do.. forever your "Sweetheart" from Hawaii with luv .. AlohA..at 4 a.m..
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Date: 6/28/2010 6:16:00 PM
Nice character drawing not using U M E. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/28/2010 4:29:00 PM
good one, I need to try this.
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Date: 6/28/2010 4:10:00 PM
You must have an IQ that soars..I still havent figured out how to do this.Love, BG
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