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Blue Louver

In the very morning your blue louver comes down everyday in a dense darkness _______________________________________________________ 12/10/2016 Sad one line contest of Silent One

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/14/2016 8:40:00 AM

Congrats Probir, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/14/2016 11:39:00 AM

Thank you ...

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/13/2016 6:45:00 PM

Hi Probir, You have penned a sad poetic one liner. Congratulations on your 2nd place win: -) Alexis

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/14/2016 5:44:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis ... probir

Lu Loo

Date: 10/13/2016 11:38:00 AM

very sadly beautiful Probir...congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/14/2016 5:45:00 AM

thank you ... probir ...

Augustus Black

Date: 10/12/2016 8:00:00 PM

Nice nice Sir. Congratulation.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/13/2016 12:10:00 AM

Thank you ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2016 11:06:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/13/2016 12:10:00 AM

Thank you , Anne ...

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/12/2016 10:13:00 AM

Congratulations Probir, well written

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/13/2016 12:11:00 AM

Thanks Charlie ... so nice of you ...

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/12/2016 7:24:00 AM

Absolutely wonderful one liner.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/12/2016 7:46:00 AM

Thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/12/2016 5:44:00 AM

Yes, it is sad dear, Probir! Wish the outcome to be a happy one! Good luck!

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/12/2016 6:02:00 AM

Well said ... happy outcome to a sad theme ... thank you in advance for the -- .....probir

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2016 2:50:00 AM

- Well done, Probir - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/12/2016 5:43:00 AM

Thank you, Anne ...

White Wolf

Date: 10/11/2016 10:44:00 PM

Good luck in the contest Probir, Love it /|\

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/12/2016 2:21:00 AM

Thank you ...