Get Your Premium Membership

Blue Eyes Meant Only For Me

Your sweet sparkling eyes, a blue pretty hue; those were a feature that drew me to you. I saw you the second time at our church dance, where I’d gone to find you - in search of romance! Although you could barely dance too well at all, I loved your brown hair and your slim form so tall. Another girl danced with you; I made a plan! That little blonde woman would not have MY man. I stared at you dancing and willed you to see that there was another with whom you should be. I kept my eyes trained on your sweet eyes of blue until you then noticed me gazing at you. . . Now 40 years later, you’ve lost your dark hair. You’re still tall, though heavier, but I don’t care. Your eyes become bloodshot from having to drive long hours for work, yet back home you arrive. . . And I am here waiting each night when I see those blue eyes I know are meant only for me! written April 2 for the funny Face Contest of Poetess Darkly)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/31/2020 12:10:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your top win! Your poem brings back so many memories of finding my husband! Thank you for leading us down memory lane.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/30/2020 3:46:00 PM
An old gem of yours Andrea, very romantic. Congrats on your win. Tom
Login to Reply
Date: 8/13/2014 11:51:00 AM
Can still feel the love in your heart for your blue eyed man. Mine guy has blue eyes too. love phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2014 10:51:00 AM
I KNOW you have honed in on your craft. The ones from 2010 you had were good, mixed with decent, and there were a cpl Amazing ones, THEN, As true with EVERY POET, there may have been a cpl, WHAT THE HELL moment poems sprinkled in there! BUT, much like this one here you've written about me (LOL), EVERY single one of the newer ones are SPOT ON! to me anyway~ SERIOUSLY THO', hugg that Hubby and tell him him you love his bloodshot eyes!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2014 10:46:00 AM
SAN-ANZ, yir abbreviated new nickname btw, or SanZ for short short, NO NEED to thank me for any comments on the poetry you've written! I will not give out fake good comments if I don't get, or if I just happen to think the poem sucks. Ha. Really, I will tell you, not if the poem is lacking, bc, if it expresses truth then it's ALL GOOD. But if it is one of those trainwreck poems ya find from time to time. I might rip ya, BUT, as the years go by, HONESTLY, your poems are SHARPER AND SHARPER!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2014 1:28:00 PM
Andrea Such a sweet, passionate and loving dedication to your man. The devotion and care in your heart is clearly written. thank you for the great comment on my Frigid Heart poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2014 10:39:00 PM
This made me smile, wonderfully done
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2014 7:56:00 PM
Sweet devotion. Some beauties never lose their luster. J.A.B.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/15/2014 8:43:00 PM
very romantic poem Andrea....
Login to Reply
Date: 4/12/2014 3:18:00 PM
awww, lovely write, my friend
Login to Reply
Date: 4/9/2014 2:43:00 PM
Hahaha..............., happens and depends with the changes of time. Please read my just posted Diamond and Diamante. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
Login to Reply
Date: 4/9/2014 7:37:00 AM
A loving tribute. If he still drives you crazy, at least you are not bored!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 3:40:00 PM
this is very sweet and touching, andrea, and so heartfelt. i love it!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 2:20:00 PM
A woman gets what she wants...Sounds like you made the perfect choice...Hugs Tim
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 12:45:00 PM
Didn't Tammy Wynette sing a song along these lines? Anywho, Good stuff. Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 11:54:00 AM
What a fun look at who you are as a couple !!! You got your man.......you kept your man....... not everyone can make it last!! Good for you!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 9:12:00 AM
I MUST ADMIT IT IS LOVELY TO HEAR YOU SAY , JERRY CAN STILL PERSUADE TOM TO COME OUT TO PLAY .LOL
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 8:25:00 AM
wow!!! ..awesome write and great story of one's happy married life... this is beautiful, Andie..!!! well done!!! ..:O))
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 8:22:00 AM
Oh dear , That little blonde woman was Dolly Parton , You're in big trouble now , lol Great poem my friend ,
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 8:16:00 AM
Lol, "what can ya do?" - I love it! A sweet one, Andrea. I sure enjoyed :)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 7:40:00 AM
Must be nice to have someone to drive you crazy. That's what love is for. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 6:23:00 AM
This is a sweet and romantic write, all warm and tender! Sometimes you just know it when someone is meant for you! Just ask many married couples and they will tell you something similar! This is a wonderful poem my friend! Quite the ingenious piece Andrea! Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 5:01:00 AM
Ahh!! True love holds a couple together..Great romantic work..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that you liked the first two stanzas of my work..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 4:28:00 AM
Lovely romantic poem Andrea!Enjoyed very much.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2014 4:27:00 AM
:) :)
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things