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blue evening

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blue evening

blue evening haunts me
memories swirl through my mind
restless as blown leaves

delicate dusk light
shades the garden twilight-teal
indigo shadow

the dying sun bleeds
day folds like a whorled flower
dark envelops me

windows' glowing eyes
gaze upon my solitude
fear's cold hand grips me

whispering voices
commune with me through silence
spectres of the past

night stirs soul sadness
alone in a soulless home
blue tears' waterfall

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  1. Date: 4/26/2014 12:49:00 PM
    Charlotte. Such a heartfelt and emotionally charged poem. Your heart and soul flow onto the page so elegantly. Thank you for the great comment on my Colors poem.

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 10:03:00 PM
    Wonderful Senryus here Charlotte!Congrats on your 3rd place win.

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 9:56:00 PM
    Congrats Charlotte on a lovely third place win with this magnificent poetry and entry luv.. enjoy..

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 4:50:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 7:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved winning piece Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 3:06:00 AM
    hey Charlotte congrats on a great win David

  1. Date: 8/29/2011 11:20:00 PM
    congrats on your third place win Charlotte, wonderful poem

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 5:07:00 PM
    this is a very good discription of night falling and with it your contenence. john

  1. Date: 8/24/2011 5:35:00 PM
    Title is simple yet vivid. Poem is simply beautiful =)

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 6:57:00 PM
    This is beautiful!!!!!!!! I love reading your poem!! Good Luck in the Contest. sounds like a winner!!!!--Lori