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Blue

Turquoise eyes shed tears Salty drops blend in blue sea Tiny ripples spread Sunset casts lone silhouette One woman, heartbroken, blue

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:24:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in the contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2011 8:34:00 PM

this one sure looks familar. And a great win for a great poem. LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/5/2011 4:37:00 PM

me & you...[sigh] so many lonely people and still we/she/he don't meet? ODD yes? Congrad's Light & Love

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/5/2011 11:04:00 AM

Hey you..congrats again...this is beautiful.. sad and lovely...BG

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/7/2011 10:32:00 AM

Nice poem. Yes, it takes guts for a man to stand up and go against the grain. He did save a lot of lives but look what he got for that. He did the right thing and I hope he runs a good political race. You know he will stand up for what he believes and that is a good trait to have. love phhyl

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 2/23/2011 7:28:00 PM

A well deserving win of this brilliant piece of Poem. Congratulations for your win my friend. Definitely a Gem like Poem from a kind and wonderful poet. Sorry I could not see it earlier. Love and best wishes....Ravindra.....Carolyn Devonshire

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Francine Roberts's contest "Blue". A well deserved win Carolyn. Love, Carol

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 2/21/2011 11:00:00 PM

nicely thought out, congratulations on your desrved win...

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/15/2011 4:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Carolyn, well deserved indeed:)

Francesca Redlich

Date: 2/15/2011 10:55:00 AM

Very evocative.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/14/2011 1:13:00 AM

I have had a cry similar to the one described in your poem. I pray your heart is now mended. Beautiful description and I bet your eyes are also. Bless U

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/11/2011 5:30:00 PM

Yes I could see we were on the same tac Congrad's Light & Love

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/11/2011 3:08:00 PM

A great win for you my dear Carolyn!!!!! Rosanna and I lost our child many years ago.. But your words are well taken.. Its is nice to write about it...thank you for being so sweet..love Michael