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Bloom For Me

Through wafts of lavender letting go meander past pain felt holes reminders grip to a wilted rose where the thorns once held a home Bloom for me and on painted petals grow bloom for me and into my recesses forever flow bring hope and meaning to an enamored soul etch sunshine across days of diluted doubt Circle around a single soiled grain of me floating on a fleeting breeze of air seen only in the lathing light of you and brush gently upon a hand of care Bloom for me and in turn I'll bloom for only you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/26/2016 11:10:00 AM
Beautiful, I really liked the line "reminders grip to a wilted rose"
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Date: 12/24/2016 7:04:00 PM
Wow! Simply....Wow! Great write, Tim. Merry Christmas. Wishing you all the best...
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Date: 12/21/2016 9:31:00 AM
We're blooming, we're blooming lol...and so is your verse Tim...beautifully done my friend...god bless and Happy Holidays!!!...**^WW^**
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Date: 12/21/2016 8:58:00 AM
Even my coffee cup sighed! Line eight is my fave.
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Date: 12/21/2016 7:41:00 AM
captivating and inspiring poem this is my friend, Tim! A seven for certain! Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/21/2016 12:55:00 AM
Oh, yes, this is so beautifully written and so full of longing... And I can see the flower in your hand. May it bloom for you.
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Date: 12/20/2016 6:23:00 PM
Tim , this reads so smoothly and moves the reader along nicely with such depth as well. :)
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Date: 12/20/2016 3:20:00 PM
I can smell the scent of blossoming gardens everywhere..There must be something in the american air....So romantic .A 7.
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Date: 12/20/2016 3:08:00 PM
Wow, this was euphoric and enchanting Tim. Beautifully expressed my friend.
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