Bliss

One look~~~ one glance Start of a new romance Passion in the night Flames burning bright One hug~~~ one kiss Two souls entwined in bliss. 16/08/15

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/22/2015 11:48:00 PM

Hello Phyllis... a nice lyric Phyllis easily imagined - Lindsay

Jan Allison

Date: 8/23/2015 5:10:00 PM

oh Phyllis this is simply delightful so few words say so much such lovely passionate imagery:-) hugs jan xx

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/25/2015 5:43:00 PM

Thank you Jan . love phyl

Jack Horne

Date: 8/19/2015 2:30:00 PM

love this passionate write, Phyll. Hope you are well & enjoying what's left of the summer xx

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/23/2015 5:01:00 PM

Hi Jack thanks for liking my passionate write. Things are fine and has been a busy summer for me. Hope your summer is going well too. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/18/2015 1:29:00 PM

- So sweet and lovely, dear Phyllis ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/18/2015 6:41:00 PM

thank you Anne Lise. love phyl

James Peranteau

Date: 8/17/2015 9:09:00 AM

How tersely beautiful is that ! Awesome dear poet ! My kinda read Phyllis ! I really enjoyed....have a wonderful week....much love, james

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/18/2015 11:07:00 AM

Thank you James you love the romantic pieces rather than the break apart ones. Love is much nicer than heartache. I hope you have a wonderful week. love phyl

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/16/2015 1:40:00 PM

so pretty... CayCay

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/18/2015 11:05:00 AM

Thank you CayCa. love phyl