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A lone palm tree near the beach Sometimes groping for something in sky Some other time coming down on the ground Seek frantically a lovely eye Eyes do come but palm stays calm On the beach smile bottles of rum A lone river towards the ocean Gazing above at the floating cloud In between a vast vacuum Aspiring to sing aloud No sound resonates in the voice box Quick passes the grey sly fox There are times when the river leaves me Robbed of all chime air is paranoid Page after page keeps crying empty Lost into barren blue, moment annoyed Getting into thick crowd broadens the void So sitting alone with dark Pink Floyd A solitary mind on a desolate road A solitary pen to a full blank page A lonely heart bearing hollowness loud A bird of forest locked in a cage In a vase of flowers despair and rage The ship gets no ground for anchorage Helpless shadow of chin on knee Lonely lonely and mere lonely ____________________________________________ July 23, 2016 Loneliness Contest

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Date: 8/9/2016 1:18:00 PM
Idealistic thoughts have been wonderfully written. Well done.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/9/2016 8:19:00 PM
Thank you ....
Date: 8/2/2016 8:32:00 AM
This is such a beauty of a poem:) Great use of metaphors:) A fave and a #7:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/9/2016 8:20:00 PM
Thank you .....
Date: 7/28/2016 1:53:00 AM
Your blank Page is full of imagery and kindness, I wonder how magnificent your full page will be....
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/29/2016 1:33:00 AM
I'll be waiting....
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/28/2016 5:31:00 AM
Interesting observation ... it may be just the reverse too, absolutely dark , and these colours to compensate ... thank you ...
Date: 7/24/2016 5:15:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your podium win for your poem in the 'loneliness' contest'! Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/25/2016 12:28:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/23/2016 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations Probir on the placement of the contest
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/24/2016 4:02:00 AM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 7/23/2016 2:43:00 AM
How could one feel lonely when verses like these fill the heart my frien, Probir? Excellen. Good luck.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/23/2016 6:06:00 AM
Thank you ... regards ...

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