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Birth of Muse - Ck

Lightning... Mind flashes, Brightening thoughts, Amid waiting word lines, nee Muse... Second Place in Poetry Poetry Contest sponsored by charles messina

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2020 4:26:00 PM

so descriptive Jenish! Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 11:44:00 PM

Thank you Jan..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2020 2:00:00 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 11:44:00 PM

Thank you Anne..

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/14/2020 10:48:00 AM

Lightning strikes twice, I see, congratulations on your win!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 11:33:00 AM

Lol..Thank you for that beautiful lines, like the lightnings making in the sky..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/14/2020 10:44:00 AM

Congratuations on your fine win in the contest, and thank you for your 'lightning-fast response to my placement! Cheers, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 11:32:00 AM

Lol..When a friend like you hitting the deck, I should be lightning fast..Thank you Gershon..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2020 2:56:00 PM

Another gem from you, Jenish. You are great with these short forms. Thanks for your recent contest, for the inspiration and the placement.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/26/2020 11:43:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for your unconditional support and I'm honoured to have your poem in my recent contest..Takecare always..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 4/22/2020 8:33:00 PM

Interesting CV ????? Death Of Muse Darkness Mind dims Blocking thoughts Inspiration Exits..... Thank you Jenish for making my old brain tick.... Take care...Shirley

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 11:34:00 PM

Lol..Great thoughts..Your brains is booming with ideas..Seems like more fresh than mine..

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/22/2020 3:30:00 PM

It is true, a thought, an idea, a syllable, can strike like lightening, and we must be ready to harness it - best wishes for the contest!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 11:31:00 PM

Thank you Michelle for your support..Takecare always..

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2020 1:58:00 PM

nee muse is great, I need a little lighting to flash thoughts in my mind.. love the verse. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 11:30:00 PM

Your pen is flashing lightnings every day..And hitting the readers hearts with joy..Takecare..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/22/2020 11:46:00 AM

Apollo would be proud of such a Muse dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx PLEASE, try again . It must have been fixed! Waiting ...thank you!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 11:27:00 PM

Thank you for your delightful comment Demetrios..Takecare..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/22/2020 7:04:00 AM

Much celebration of thoughts in your words Jenish--that is how one feels when creative spirits reign.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 10:59:00 AM

Thank you Vijay.. Takecare always..

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/22/2020 7:04:00 AM

Great cinqku my friend...stay safe...^WW^ :o)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 10:57:00 AM

Thank you Winged Warrior..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/22/2020 6:21:00 AM

Perfect, the spark that ignites your thoughts that leads to your poem. Good luck Stay safe Tom

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 10:57:00 AM

Thank you Tom for your delightful comment.. Takecare..