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The tiniest seeds stretch to touch the morning light; nutrient craving fetuses’ in Gaia’s womb, must be nurtured very well.
For Contest: One Nature Tanka – Inspired By My Short Poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/15/2017 8:51:00 AM
Dear M.L., You have a style that I love to read. The universe breathes Birth! My best to you Ms. Poetess, chuck
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/9/2017 6:37:00 PM
Thank you Chuck.
Date: 9/15/2016 5:25:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this gem. Much love.........A.M.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/9/2017 6:37:00 PM
You are welcome and thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 8/27/2016 8:27:00 PM
Yes it does take a lot of care and nurturing for seeds to grow. But all of the effort is so worth it... I really enjoyed this beautiful poem, M.L. Nice work!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/9/2017 6:40:00 PM
I'm glad Kelly and thank you.
Date: 8/7/2016 1:34:00 PM
moving read, M L.. congrats on your fine win!..huggs
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/9/2017 6:40:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 8/6/2016 8:23:00 PM
This was a very creative Tanka...beautifully written!!
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Date: 8/4/2016 11:03:00 PM
Hi M.L., I enjoyed reading this creative write tonight. Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/4/2016 7:28:00 PM
If Gaia is Mother Earth, then Gaia's mother is the universe (or multiverse, etc.). Nice, thoughtful tanka. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 8/4/2016 5:35:00 PM
Very creative entry for the contest. Congrats . I enjoyed this one.
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Date: 8/1/2016 1:55:00 AM
Superbly written filled with beauty and meaning! A seven dear, M.L.Kiser
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