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Beware

Hope's harbor serene Million dreams safely anchored Beware of fear's subs! © Demetrios Trifiatis 07 NOVEMBER 2014

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/13/2014 8:53:00 AM

I love how you kept this Ku tight and intertwined. Line 1:harbor Line 2: anchored Line 3: subs. Really creative.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/13/2014 8:56:00 AM

It pays to be a...philosopher!Ha-ha! Merci for your visits dear, Maurice!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/10/2014 9:36:00 AM

love the picture demetrios this drew for me excellent pen dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/10/2014 10:53:00 AM

How many times in our lives that everything appears to be fine, the unexpected comes? Thank you my friend, Liam, for your kind visit and comment!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/10/2014 1:46:00 AM

It is good to keep a watchful eye, I will heed your advice.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/10/2014 10:51:00 AM

Well, Richard, we all should keep a watchful eye! Thank you my friend for taking the time to visit!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/8/2014 2:29:00 AM

Beautifully penned, Demetrios! Much enjoyed my dear friend. :) love n hugs ! xxx D.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/8/2014 2:40:00 AM

Thank you, Dorian, my good friend! Love and hugs to you too!

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/7/2014 11:47:00 PM

You issue a stern, important warning in this work. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/8/2014 1:08:00 AM

Thank you for appreciating the message, dear Matthew! Peace & Blessings to you too!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/7/2014 4:08:00 AM

- There will always be something to fear .... but important to have hopes and dreams - A great haiku my dear friend Demetrios :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/7/2014 5:27:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Anne-Lise, for your kind visit and constructive comment!

Tim Smith

Date: 11/7/2014 3:57:00 AM

Love the ship comparison....well done...cheers Tim

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/7/2014 5:30:00 AM

Metaphors are always helpful, my friend, Tim! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!