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Between Lines

Spaces full between lines full of dreams hopes memories Ordinary? No special smile speaking face to face longing for an embrace feeling a heart a soul needing comfort security pining to be heard beneath lines truths telling testimonies whispered with words Ordinary? No listen closely behind that special smile living between the lines

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Date: 8/9/2015 10:51:00 AM
Interesting! I will be surpassed by you on the 'all time- Community points " list today or tomorrow. You have worked hard on your poetry and should be appreciated by more than this... Maybe a contest around you would be nice... Or you should have a contest of your own... Now... Just saying... You are on your way to famous... if you keep writting like you have... They are all thought proviking and sigh-able...
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Date: 8/7/2015 3:55:00 PM
- There are always words between the lines ...... beautiful poem, Tim - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/7/2015 3:02:00 PM
Your write swirl In the readers brain jaunt to spike their heart yet mystery in it. Excellence........A.M.
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Date: 8/7/2015 7:25:00 AM
Sometimes between the lines the unseen and the unfelt are waiting to be seen and felt and by doing so the lines are filled with meaning, dear Tim! Imaginative!
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Date: 8/6/2015 11:43:00 PM
this is magical Tim, loved it!
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Date: 8/6/2015 10:09:00 PM
There is a world of mysteries between the lines.....lovely....
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Date: 8/6/2015 3:25:00 PM
we often need to read between the lines to be understood Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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