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Bending Light

I want to bend my light, so that you're able to see The essence you illuminated, that was inside of me I never imagined, you'd be with me still A moment A fragrance I'll love you until Until the oceans evaporate The stars fall from the sky Until the laws of gravity break I'll always be your guy You make it easy to love you I don't even have to try You are God's perfect gift My parched soul's no longer dry I want to bend my light, so that you're able to see Nothing is impossible, love does set us free I never imagined, my heart peaceful and still A smile A caress I'll love you until Until twenty before never several minutes beyond eternity You are more than just perfection You're the only women for me All that I have ever wished for I am now able to see Not a single thing is missing You've filled a life that felt empty Knowing light can bend I'll bend it around heart It was always meant for you I knew it from the start Dance with me my darling feel the pulse within my hand I am yours now and forever can you feel the light expand.......?

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/9/2016 12:52:00 PM

This is brilliant beyond words... A lovely and wonderful share

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/2/2016 2:56:00 AM

I read this beauty on Facebook. You really know how to infuse your love for your sweetie in your words. It's palpable. Wonderful write.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2016 8:14:00 AM

Thanks, I liked this one even better once I got the idea to create the curves.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/28/2016 11:45:00 PM

I remember seeing this shape on Facebook but never ended up reading it. Not only was this very creative, but a beautiful expression of love. The concept of bending light and connecting it with your passion was engaging for me ... I bet this was a joy, not only to come up with the words, but to create that beautiful shape ... loved this one!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2016 7:42:00 PM

You are correct, it basically means there will never be a time when I will not love her.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/28/2016 11:47:00 PM

The only thing I slipped up on was "until twenty before never" ...? Is it a play on words with something everyday you would say like, "Until twenty before eight o'clock", but with 'never' as the replacement?

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/25/2016 5:08:00 PM

you are brilliant and always a pleasure to read x

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/25/2016 8:24:00 PM

Thanks and a big hug to you.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/25/2016 7:45:00 AM

Imaginative, knowledgeable and romantic! Excellent dear, Richard! A love that defies space and time!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/25/2016 1:08:00 PM

Thanks Demetrios, I have enjoyed your flowers on Facebook.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/24/2016 3:11:00 PM

Love both shape and poem dear friend.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2016 4:35:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine. :0)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/23/2016 10:33:00 PM

and just when I think I am the most creative poet in the whole universe! you outdo me!!!! :) This is brilliant, wonderful and ingenious! A7 Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2016 8:09:00 AM

Hi Arthur, I don't think you have to relinquish your crown. I am pleased you enjoyed this one. I've made a few changes to help with meaning and flow.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/23/2016 10:13:00 PM

Deair Richard Just an awesome tribute to the romantic heart of loving my poetic friend, your lady is one lucky woman I'm sure shes read this one and knows how much she means to her, awesome again just a wonderful tribute to this special lady of yours, take care and you to have a great week together, cheri d.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2016 8:11:00 AM

I try to find ways to let her know how special she is to me. Thanks for the kind and thoughtful visit. Hugs Rick.