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Bench of Memories

There's a bench at the high school where I graduated The wood is cracked, chipped and all weather faded But in its prime, there each morning faces smiled hello greetings And was always the agreed upon place, for after school meetings Many then, lovers initials are carved upon her wood Though young love didn't last like we thought it could Also, many peace signs and let's stop Vietnam Even, one I love John Denver and a, I rule at pac man Under her bottom is petrified gum of every flavor Stuck there, because gum in class was considered bad behavior Like some people need but one name to be known The Bench, was like a city of its very own.... ©Donna Jones Originally posted 3-19-2013, On A Bench Contest

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Date: 5/1/2014 8:38:00 PM
this is wonderful writing and wow takes me back... Bravo to you... Brooke
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Date: 12/27/2013 5:21:00 PM
Awe, Donna, I like this one and remember it well... Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with the family. It is still touching... xox.. Linda
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Date: 12/27/2013 11:03:00 PM
Thank you Linda.....same to ya......hugs and blessings
Date: 12/22/2013 8:13:00 AM
Excellent. Well crafted poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs. I wish you a Merry Christmas and a very happy new year for 2014. God bless
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Date: 12/23/2013 8:04:00 AM
Thank you Ravi....and very merry Christmas to you as well...God bless....
Date: 12/21/2013 1:51:00 PM
I love how many memories that you creatively crafted out of such a simple object that has been shared by most at one time or another.
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Date: 12/21/2013 5:33:00 PM
Thank you David. Very kind of you...have a great Christmas
Date: 12/21/2013 5:06:00 AM
Here I find part of my lost world, when I was a child. My wooden bench was similar to the one described here so effectively, and affectively too. Moreover, the blu and dirty ink of those times is coming back to life in my memory....
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Date: 12/21/2013 5:31:00 PM
So glad you could relate....awesome times weren't they!Thanks for stopping by..
Date: 12/20/2013 3:39:00 PM
hi donns... go more?.. saying hello t you and happy weekend!... huggs
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Date: 12/21/2013 5:29:00 PM
Hope you are having a good weekend nette...we are having an ice storm...everything is covered in about one third inch and on the verge of disaster...:-( ..I may be without internet service a while....if you don't hear from me
Date: 12/20/2013 2:36:00 PM
Just a simple bench yet it was such so much more by representation alone, great job here on this write. cheri and also for your comments on my work, also merry christmas to you and yours
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Date: 12/21/2013 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Cherl...very much and merry Christmas to you as well
Date: 12/20/2013 2:25:00 PM
this bench signify memories... great piece with allusion to couple it all.
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Donna Jones
Date: 12/21/2013 5:23:00 PM
Thank you so much....and what a pretty name you have..
Date: 12/20/2013 1:00:00 PM
My Dear Donna, I am so glad you reposted this. It brought back so many treasured memories of mine! You are a great writer and I am a fan! chuck ps speaking of nostalgia, do u remember this?......I had a girl......Donna was her name......Since she left me....I've never been the same.....But I loved my girl...Donna...where can you be.....
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Date: 12/21/2013 5:22:00 PM
Ahh thanks chuck....very sweet...yeah I've heard the song a time or two..haha...thanks so much for stopping by
Date: 12/20/2013 5:36:00 AM
Fond memories are stored 'pon that bench..Enjoyed reading this creative work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/21/2013 5:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara....coming over to see your page soon...
Date: 12/19/2013 7:46:00 PM
So glad this one didn't get deleted!! Nice memories to keep!!
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Date: 12/21/2013 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Carrie...along with the new ones!..:-)
Date: 12/19/2013 2:30:00 PM
This one brings back lotsa memories Donna, i remember those old wooden desks had lot of carvings and memories as well as gum. Great write. Blessings Carl
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Date: 12/21/2013 9:13:00 AM
Yeah..the good ol' days Carl...:-) :-) thanks so much for stopping by!
Date: 12/19/2013 7:49:00 AM
- Can not remember if I've read it before .... in any case it is a really good poem to re-post! - I want to thank you for a enjoyable friendship in years 2013 - Wishing you and your family a happy Christmas - thanks for the many beautiful poems - and thanks for the many pleasant comments on my poems. - Love / always to you Donna!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/21/2013 8:35:00 AM
Anne Lise..you're the sweetest.thank you also....for your friendship and always uplifting poems...
Date: 12/18/2013 6:09:00 PM
Well, I'm glad you reposted it and shame on you for deleting it! I haven't done such a thing since last month...Great poem, great memories...Have a blessed Christmas my friend - Tim
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Donna Jones
Date: 12/21/2013 8:28:00 AM
Merry Christmas back my friend...and glad you liked it....this silly touch screen...I've noticed several I guess I..just hit that stupid x and didnt even realize it..gotta gothru the notebook one of these days....:-) :-) :-) :-) HAPPY NEW YEAR too...:-) :-) :-)
Date: 12/18/2013 9:12:00 AM
Great poem Donna i'm glad you reposted it so i got to reat it. I can see that old bench in my head. A lot of good memerioes too. Thank you also Donna for your comments. I hope you have a joyful holiday season.
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Date: 12/21/2013 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Vincent...so much....and wonderful holidays to you and yours too...
Date: 12/18/2013 1:02:00 AM
This poem is a grand time machine you've invented. I enjoyed going back there for a glimpse. I wouldn't want to stay too long, however. Very nicely written
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Date: 12/21/2013 7:49:00 AM
I know what you mean....reminds me of how old I'm getting!!.:-) :-) thanks for your visit...
Date: 12/17/2013 11:11:00 AM
This makes me sigh. Thank you for warm congrats on my last win, Donna. -- Carly
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Date: 12/21/2013 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Carly....and my pleasure to read your poem...
Date: 12/17/2013 7:59:00 AM
Nice memories. I like that you made the bench a 'her' not a thing.
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Date: 12/21/2013 7:43:00 AM
Thanks Monterey....she definitely deserves to be a girl..not a thing..filled with love she is....thanks again...
Date: 12/16/2013 7:35:00 PM
Hi Donna, Nice blast from the past write! Ken
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Date: 12/21/2013 7:41:00 AM
Hey thanks Ken....is that a bandanna...or a welders cap? I know a few welders...:-) :-) like your new pic..
Date: 12/16/2013 1:28:00 PM
Very good couplet here and beautiful story of that bench Donna.Lovely read.
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Date: 12/21/2013 7:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Kash...really appreciate it..
Date: 12/15/2013 5:08:00 PM
hi donns, gpt more?... just passing through... huggs
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Date: 12/21/2013 7:30:00 AM
Hey nette...ahhh.lots of family for Christmas holiday and a sickness in the family but will be back much more after Christmas!!! And will try to get out a little before...thanks....:-) :-) miss ya:-) :-)
Date: 12/15/2013 8:51:00 AM
A worthy repost, enjoyed rereading. Adding back to my favorites.
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Donna Jones
Date: 12/15/2013 8:10:00 PM
Ah thank you Richard..very sweet
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Date: 12/15/2013 8:52:00 AM
I have featured you in my most recent poem.
Date: 12/15/2013 4:49:00 AM
Maybe initials carved on the bench have faded away but the memories of that period never will! A wonderful and nostalgic poem a time capsule of our youth reminded us of the world we have left behind! Excellent, dear Donna!
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Donna Jones
Date: 12/15/2013 8:10:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios....yes wonderful memories...and small towns especially, never seem to change...that's what I love about mine...
Date: 12/14/2013 5:54:00 PM
You KNOW I wanted to turn this into a ghazal ;) LOL Light & Love
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Donna Jones
Date: 12/15/2013 8:08:00 PM
Is that good Debbie? I'll have to get out my dictionary...remember I'm about the most unschooled poet here I think....if it is maybe you can help me do it:-)
Date: 12/14/2013 3:54:00 PM
lovely write - so glad it wasn't lost forevr
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Donna Jones
Date: 12/15/2013 8:03:00 PM
Well thank you very much...:-) :-) :-) :-)
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