Home » Poems » Andrea Dietrich » Belles On the Lake

Andrea Dietrich | + Follow Poet |

Belles On the Lake

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Andrea Dietrich.

Unruffled beauties float in boats rowed by their beaus one warm Georgia day. With fragile paper-white hands, they fold their fans at twilight. For the One New or Old Tanka Poetry Contest of Rick Parise

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/8/2019 9:18:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery Andrea. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! : ) xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 9/24/2016 3:13:00 PM

What fabulous imagery:-) many congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 9/24/2016 2:19:00 PM

Andrea- lovely Tanka for a lovely lady :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/24/2016 11:02:00 AM

Southern beauty of a Tanka! Congrats, Andrea! :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/24/2016 10:33:00 AM

Such a tranquil vision from the past, Jan. Love the imagery and congrats on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/24/2016 10:15:00 AM

What a lovely picture you've painted! Congrats on your win, Constance! Janice

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/24/2016 10:16:00 AM

I meant ANDREA! I'm sorry! Janice

Red Omara

Date: 5/7/2013 7:47:00 PM

A scene of long gone elegance elegantly portrayed. - Red

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/3/2013 5:53:00 PM

Wow! Andrea love the image conveyed. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Warm smiles, Connie

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/3/2013 2:29:00 PM

Very nice with this piece. Have not checked out contest for a while. love phyl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/3/2013 8:03:00 AM

This is a very special piece, I love it. Straight to my favorites.

David De La Croes

Date: 5/3/2013 5:50:00 AM

Your poem awakes images of swans folding and unfolding their wings! Very beautiful, and congratulations on your win, Andrea. David

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/2/2013 10:56:00 AM

Just beautiful..congrats. BG

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/2/2013 5:49:00 AM

Congrats on your win here, Andrea...I'm afraid my unruffled beauty would be fishing the whole time...haha...she would

Len Gasun

Date: 5/2/2013 2:57:00 AM

So glad to read this outstanding Tanka of yours once again my dear friend Andrea & so happy to see it in the winning list! Many huge hearty congratulations on your awesome win here & your other super wins recently. Cheers & big big hugs! love much, Leonora