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Author's Notes:  This is a "Tanka" or Japanese verse form write on the subject:  "Being." For this write, I've looked at "Being" from the standpoint of material and spiritual philosophy which delves into how we as human beings may choose to look at ourselves in relation to the greater Universe or Cosmos.  Borrowing from Rene Descartes (the French philosopher and mathematician) and his Rationalism doctrine, I considered his oft quoted expression:  "I think, therefore I am."  And the next logical step:  " I exist."  The syllable count for this Tanka is:  5-7-5-7-7 (for a total of 31 syllables).  (Gary Bateman - November 12, 2014) (Tanka poetic format)     

Categories:  adventure, allegory, change, faith, introspection, philosophy, and spiritual.

The discussion point— I Be, I Am, I Exist. Being is presence. Philosophers Rejoice, Yes . . . The mortal plane is confirmed! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, Schoeningen, Germany (November 12, 2014) (Tanka poetic format)

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Date: 11/14/2014 6:21:00 PM
beautifully crafted gary as always excellent pen
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/14/2014 9:11:00 PM
Liam . . . I can always put trust in the ye' old Leprechauns to inspire me as I clamor to write each verse. Cheers!! Gary
Date: 11/13/2014 3:04:00 PM
this reminds me of existentialism; very well expressed in a profound way, gary...you are amazing!.. huggs
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/13/2014 3:48:00 PM
Nette, Thanks so much for your read here and your very kind words. I'm glad you liked my venture into philosophy. Since I received very positive comments from Demetrios (who is a philosopher) then I guess I got my analysis right. I think you and your poetry are quite amazing too!! Best Always Nette!! Gary
Date: 11/13/2014 3:02:00 PM
Descartes, mein freund, es ist wunderbar, Thank you for the trilogy. You are a philosopher after all! A seven!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/13/2014 3:44:00 PM
Demetrios . . . Ich bedanke mich sehr hier mein guter Fruend!! Descartes ist wirklich ganz fabelhaft!! I did study some philosophy, but, of course, I'm not on par with you and my wife who have studied and read so much more. But, I do try and sometimes have my moments of philosophical discussion!! Best Always!! Gary
Date: 11/12/2014 7:37:00 PM
Amazing tanka! Another unique incredible tanka for me to mull for me for awhile, Gary my good friend. :) enjoyed reading it for you! A 7 it is :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/13/2014 3:35:00 PM
"D" -- Thanks so much!! I'm glad you liked this Tanka. (Thanks for the "7") I just recently took up writing these. (I prefer the Tanka over the Haiku.) I plan to do some Choka writes in the near future, and other new forms too!! I will get over soon to see your latest writes. (I promise!!) Best Always . . . XOXO, Gary

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