Before His Eyes

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FROM MY ROOF GARDEN. PICTURE TAKEN BY ME (c)

Sickness devoured him Death before his eyes did see Soul's celebration (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 05 July 2016 5-7-5

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/5/2016 7:48:00 AM

- Death can be a relief - Deep and great haiku poems my friend - I love that you are using your own beautiful photo, a treat for the eyes - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/5/2016 8:10:00 AM

- I have experienced many people who wish the death welcome - I was an adult .... before I understood it - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/5/2016 7:54:00 AM

You must know better because of your profession my dearest, friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much for complimenting my flowers! Hugs!