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Because I Blink

Crazy fun prodigy—from a distance A real sight to see, But here and near— Awkward, quiet, rubbing your hands together, stammering… Are you really sweating right now? Breathing through your teeth? As if a clamped jaw is going to create conversation…. You can’t even look me in the eye! But I’ve got the intensity of a spider identifying its dine I’m not going to drink you— I’m going to watch you squirm, Let you tug in all the wrong places You will look up eventually And when you do, You won’t be able to move anymore No— Not like you used to, With that confident saunter, And that free, jubilant chortle Those grand hand gestures, Wrapping all in your wing with locket fascination I don’t open empty, golden clasps I don’t weave for butterflies— I kill for silent moths! I see with multiple eyes those fading designs— You are not special like me Your blood is wasted on these strings How could one who is so used to the dark Be so attracted to this light? It’s in you, little moth Whether I adore you or not And because I blink BECAUSE I BLINK I guess I am letting you go tonight So flee—don’t be blind anymore Open those tiny eyes, And let those wings of yours take flight!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/5/2016 9:11:00 PM
Not many can envision the spider with a sense of compassion ... only the peculiar and the artists. I hope that moth made good use of that extra bit of life he was gifted. Once again you surprise with your subject matter and fine use of English ... excellent as always, Laura (I never imagined insects blinking before, but I guess they do) ....
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/5/2016 11:54:00 PM
Yes, I happen to be on the peculiar side. I wrote this one after finding a black widow under my table. Brother drowned it sadly... (RIP : ( ) Interestingly enough, spiders actually cannot blink,(I believe most insects if not all of em' can't blink) as they have no eyelids or coverings like mammals do. Thanks for reading this one, as this poem means a lot to me. <3~Laura
Date: 6/2/2016 3:54:00 PM
Powerful pen Laura, you weave with such intensity , and drop lines lessens would die for....I think you are greatly inspiring...Ian
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/2/2016 7:43:00 PM
Thank you Ian! Means a lot. This one's near and dear to me, and I am happy with how it turned out. Glad for your feebback - also, I'll be explorin your page soon. <3~Laura
Date: 6/2/2016 9:15:00 AM
Wonderful write dear....It's great that you blinked! ;)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/2/2016 7:46:00 PM
All those tiny little eyes closing at the same time. (: Thank you so much Eileen. Your feedback is always treasured. <3~Laura
Date: 6/2/2016 7:42:00 AM
You show your power! What a great design of a spider in a web, very well said!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/2/2016 7:45:00 PM
Thanks for stoppin by, Casarah! I really appreciate it. <3~Laura

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