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Be My Valentine

To call a rose by any other name Could never do justice to you To see you name there in the frame Makes my heart go out to you… A rose as fair, perfumed to perfection The palest yellow petals that glow Make my heart beat as though with infection My temperature it raises so. So Mystic lady I ask you this one time If I were a boy, rich, strong and tall Would you then be my valentine? And we can leave now, and sod them all. © 10/01/2013 Entry for Mystic Roses' contest: Be my Valentine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/12/2013 10:20:00 AM
hmmmmmm,, nice poem Mandy...
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Date: 1/11/2013 3:59:00 AM
Is that a little bit soon for a valentine? Ha-ha! Cleverly written. Nice work, like it!
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Date: 1/10/2013 9:54:00 PM
This is good Mandy. Thank you for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 1/11/2013 1:32:00 AM
Bit of fuxn Lucilla x
Date: 1/10/2013 6:56:00 PM
very clever how you made it to mystic lady!!! This was so cute, Mandy.
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Date: 1/11/2013 1:31:00 AM
Her contest Andy lol xx
Date: 1/10/2013 4:59:00 PM
Mandy,,, nice,,pd
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Date: 1/11/2013 1:31:00 AM
Thanks pd xx
Date: 1/10/2013 4:20:00 PM
Ugg, it's Valentine already? I'll be your Valentine, Mandy :) Great poem!
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Date: 1/11/2013 1:31:00 AM
Ok Toquyen , love lol xx

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