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Ballroom Delights

Ballroom delights You in black and me in royal blue, Silky gown giving my curves a perfect hue, handsome men and lovely ladies pair, Dancing to the tunes perfect in flair, Lights lend shine to faces that bear smiles, Fragrance of delight in ballroom worthwhile, Shining floor reflects colours of cheer, Contagious joys in minutes sprout as a spear, Your arms around my waist as I face you close, Eyes in eyes and many emotions disclose, Heart beats with every step when rhyme, Can't conceal my love for you sublime, Time freezes, late till night and early next day, Through and through passionate lovers will play! Written December 2nd, 2014 For contest 'Ballroom delights' by Isaiah Zerbst Awarded 4th place

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:36:00 PM
DR UPMA, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:28:00 PM
A delightful read. Congrats on a terrific write and win! Hugs
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Date: 12/16/2014 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Dr. Sharma, beautiful poem. Bless you
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Date: 12/16/2014 2:50:00 PM
So beautiful and descriptive. Congratulations on your win Dr. Sharma
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:10:00 PM
Congrats Upma,yours is a grain and not a shaft,good the judge spoted this,,,huggs
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Date: 12/16/2014 12:03:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/16/2014 11:58:00 AM
You must have been very charming in royal blue dear Upma! Enjoyed this ballroom delight in which love had a major part to play. Congrats on your big win. // May I take the opportunity to wish you a Happy Christmas and all the best for 2015. // paul
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Date: 12/7/2014 4:53:00 AM
Great Sonnet, I hope this rates high in the contest.
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Date: 12/6/2014 9:56:00 AM
A pure joy to read this fine write my friend. Rhyme, flow and message are all great. I suspect that this write will place very high in the contest. Solid 7 from me and its a superb sonnet!
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Date: 12/5/2014 11:15:00 AM
This is fresh work to read after all the Christmas poems I've read today, thank you for this. I love the beauty in this romantic waltz of poetic melody that you have put into words so elequently great job, cheri
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Date: 12/3/2014 12:04:00 PM
Reads like a winning entry to me..Way to go ..I can just hear The Blue Danube Waltz play..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 12/3/2014 8:03:00 AM
Festive hearts dancing in souls' ecstatic ballroom following love's melody! Superb, dear Dr. Upma!
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Date: 12/2/2014 10:08:00 PM
Beautiful, romantic, vivid and passionate. Very good for the contest. Will be back for more of your works. Kim Patrice :)
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Date: 12/2/2014 6:00:00 PM
Very nice.
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Date: 12/2/2014 4:02:00 PM
Nice one for the contest. Quite charming!
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Date: 12/2/2014 11:59:00 AM
so beautifully penned Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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