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Balancing the Senses

This sitting takes me to an attic of raw light bestowing foams of quiet glow for travelers unyielding to a precise compass of direction, a spaceless space nourished as it were, losing the self to Bodhi-like clouds and nomadic lotus spreads. I release this soul buried in the kundalini to a congregation of ambient tunes saying nothing, taking flight unto a hymn of unknown obedience moved by elemental balance: no more weight or cities divided, united by forms of one, one core. My malleable flesh dissolves into tiny breaths; it comes and leaves with floating grace ascending the next chi , as I go deep, deeper… high, higher centering second, fourth, seventh chakra until this my body- mind- spirit marries in a ceremony of calm traversing zones unnamed by time, one with all senses, bliss or regrets… the airiness of journeying through this unshaped season fed by something unbidden in my life so blessed. I step outside my body, somewhere… without a trace that realms chop my head, searching for a mantra of stars… stillness fed.
* chi – life energy * kundalini--a force which ordinarily rests at the base of the spine. *chakras-major centers of spiritual power Roy Jerden’s Religious Poetry: Non-Christian Buddhism 10/18/2014

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Date: 10/26/2014 1:26:00 AM
Very creative and inspiring piece of art, especially the second half. Many many congrats.......................... :D
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Date: 10/25/2014 6:00:00 PM
Incredible write Nette. Congrats on the win
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Date: 10/24/2014 10:50:00 AM
Nice and wonderful presentation...Great work....Congrats on your well deserved win..
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Date: 10/24/2014 1:27:00 AM
Congrats. Nette, on the win and for your choice of the theme of YOGA. It is not exclusive to Budhism which is but an offshoot of Hinduism.All the masters of Yoga like Patanjali and the Sidhas lived long before the Budha.
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Date: 10/23/2014 11:31:00 AM
Absolutely superb Nette many congrats on your podium place right at the top:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/22/2014 10:07:00 PM
Big congratulations on your solo super win my very dear friend Nette! Biggest hugs and cheers! I extremely enjoyed your outstanding masterpiece! Thank you so much. love lots, Leonora
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Date: 10/22/2014 9:35:00 PM
Congratulations Nette.. :) as always..................... :D! miss you.. hugs and hugs mwah. :D!
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Date: 10/22/2014 9:28:00 PM
a wonderful pen Nette congrats on win hugs
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Date: 10/22/2014 6:30:00 PM
Another masterful write nette. Congratulations on your first place win overall.
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Date: 10/22/2014 5:44:00 PM
This contest was worth doing if only because you might not have written this poem otherwise... A true masterpiece. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/22/2014 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your top of the podium first place win. This all sounds so peaceful Nette
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Date: 10/22/2014 12:06:00 PM
- Your poem on top of the winners' !!!! - Congratulations my friend, Nette !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/22/2014 9:56:00 AM
Beautifully expressed poem, nette, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/20/2014 4:17:00 PM
really love how penned this piece nette golden pen dear friend
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Date: 10/20/2014 3:19:00 PM
Your mysticism is merry in blooming energy, your chakras ancient in twirling youth Nette! Crown chakra is alight in you, "Attic of raw light...Malleable flesh dissolves into tiny breaths...Mantra of stars...AWESOME! From macro to micro to sight to flight, this poem is a bona fide teaching Nette...J.A.B.
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Date: 10/20/2014 8:23:00 AM
It is with a tranquil spirit that in quiet surrender of the moment a wonderful transformation takes place. Your poetic talent glows! This is a favored verse, Nette
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Date: 10/20/2014 2:23:00 AM
Excellent. beautifully said. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 10/19/2014 9:21:00 PM
I know nothing of the religions Peter mentions, I do know the universe is a circle of birth and rebirth.I know between the violent upheaveal of nature is peace.I comprehend the beauty you find in the stillness and wish it washed down upon all humanity, to give comfort for the insanityof mankind...good luck and may peace be with you my poetic friend
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Date: 10/19/2014 5:22:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work. Also for the information about other religious beliefs...Thanks for the visit to my page..I did jam those ends..Almost like a jammed biscuit..Sara
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Date: 10/19/2014 12:51:00 PM
In stillness the kundalini unfolds, raising upwards the chaKras, opening one after the other till we start seeing with our third eye at which point the divine chakra waits to open to a world of beauty unimaginable by the non-initiate! Great work dear Nette!
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Date: 10/19/2014 12:16:00 PM
Pure gold mine. The contemplative aura and calmness of your poem make it so serene. Faving this! I had a wonderful tine with your last contest. Thank you, Nette!
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Date: 10/19/2014 11:09:00 AM
Nette, So neat and so wonderful and so beautifully written. The meditation work at hand in putting this fantastic poem together is quite obvious. I absolutely marvel at the way you constructed this light poetry write with all of the interweaved meditative detail. Extraordinary work here Nette!! A "7" from me!! And Best of Luck in the contest!! You have a winner here in my opinion. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 10/19/2014 7:57:00 AM
- So beautifully written, Nette ..... to see, touch and perceive through all the senses - Luck in contest! - Happy Sunday :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/19/2014 7:13:00 AM
Relaxing! awesome the balance in your poem, good luck in the contest. :)
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