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back stabber

Rage of biblical proportion
I think like God
when I think of the notion
Love as deep as an ocean
you can mess with my head
but don't mess with my emotions
Poisoned and there is no antidote
My forgiveness is an anvil
trying hard not to float
Drowning with the weight of disaster
Love turn to hate I can't think of nothing faster
Beauty, that's what you were to me
the biggest part of this curse
is what I have to leave
Insecurity is not my mistake
Trust was so fragile so easy to break
Impurity for love or just a date
To live with jealousy is to live with hate

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  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:03:00 PM
    you didn't tell me you had a win with this one, 2nd place no less, written from the heart and experience methinks, that knife in the back modesty who usually trumpets about his poetry is strangely silent whenever he has a contest win (another one of your character contradictions)

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 11/9/2012 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I resent the trumpet statement. My poetry doesn't me to trumpet it. That would be in bad taste.
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Delilah's "Adultery" contest John III. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 11:55:00 AM
    Can feel your wounds festering.....awesome write John! Congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:46:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your first win John xx

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/7/2012 12:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oops, on your win , not first win. xx
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 10:29:00 PM
    Congratulations. Seren

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 8:30:00 PM
    John, congratulations in Delilah's " Adultery , forgive or not to forgive " contest. Enjoyed stopping by to read her winners. Good Night~ Always & Forever PD"

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:39:00 PM
    there's a thin line between love and hate...

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 10/23/2012 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Remember remember the fifth of November the gun fire treason and plot. I no of no reason the gun fire treason should ever be forgot.
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:19:00 PM
    powerful poem here John, like this ....

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:35:00 PM
    awesome words you got up there John,,,, now I see why you were "caught up" in my poem SUMMER LOVE ;} Yes my head will spin like the " exorcist" when I catch someone betraying my trust ;}

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 1:47:00 PM
    * Returning To Thank Your Precious Beautiful Heart, Dear John, For Your Wonderful Lovely Visit. 'Love As Deep As An Ocean.' I Love That. Happy Holidays. My Love, Rachel *

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 2:50:00 PM
    The last line is truth..Jealousy is a green-eyed monster..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 10:02:00 AM
    Well written poem John and I like a world filled with love and peace that is full of forgiveness. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 10:27:00 PM
    Hello, John, i love the notion that defines the ocean within your head.. i do not think God is one we should mess with. ,, about the ending of your poem, i think we all live in hate one way or another... jealousy is the rage you talk about..xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 10:20:00 PM
    ‡ 'To Live Jealousy Is To Live With Hate.' Since Your Precious Heart Mentioned, 'GOD,' This Powerful Poem Made Myself Remember A Verse From The King James Bible Wherein Was Spoken, 'The Spirit Is A Jealous Spirit...' Understanding There Are Many Different Forms In Jealousy, Then Yes Dear John, Let Us Stive To Rise Above, Amid The Tender Arms Of Love. Wonderful Poem, Truly. Love, Rachel ‡