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(Rhyme) Ending your life wasn't easy for me, But back then, I was so young and so naive, Manipulated and feeling trapped by those, You see, who were supposed to take care of me. Sorry my sweet baby angel, my little child, Please forgive me for what I've done to you, Now I fully understand, what was meant to be, And the terrible injustice I've done against you. Now I have to live without you the rest of my days, Remembering forever,that I could have, had you But never happened to be and now will never be, Now it's too late, for you and also for me. I didn't really want it to do it that way, But I was so very young and almost a child myself, Kind of lost and astrayed and easily by others mislead, I wasn't strong enough to protected you and fight for you. I always loved you well my sweet baby angel of mine! Sleep well my sweet child that one day in heaven we'll meet again. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 aka ladylove copyright@2014 December,04,2014 Author notes: Not about me, no, this is just a fictional write of mine but sadly abortion is not at all fiction but a very sad and heartbreaking reality to me as a woman, a human being and a Christian. Not passing judgment here but just my very personal opinion to which I am entitled as a person and a writer. This is a fictional poem about a young mom regreting years later about her abortion.But sadly and true thousands if not millions of babies up to this day,had been killed thru abortions all over the world.

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Date: 12/4/2014 8:49:00 PM
Very power words. I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme stay true and keep on expressing your mind
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Date: 12/4/2014 11:43:00 AM
Hi Dorian, What a lovely heart felt rhyme. God loves all the little children in the world. We will never know why things happen as they do. But this line really caught my attention. But I was so very young and almost a child myself. we are all still children at heart, no matter how old. Bless You Kevin
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Date: 12/4/2014 8:29:00 AM
Millions or even billions my dear, Dorian, of these little angels have made the heaven richer as, without their will, have returned to their celestial home! The story very touching and true. The reasons of it are many and we do not know what makes all those prospective mothers to be commit such a painful act. God bless them and forgive them if forgiveness is due. Very sensitive issue, very well expressed!
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Date: 12/4/2014 7:52:00 AM
A very heartbreaking poem on an even more heartbreaking subject. You did this beautifully Dorian.
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