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Azure Heights

The large tree crawls up to the azure heights Where cloudy days cover some of the blue The top of the tree has some leaves it likes The large tree crawls up to the azure heights This mighty tree floats way up with the kites Cutting it down is not giving its due The large tree crawls up to the azure heights Where cloudy days cover some of the blue
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/9/2013 10:48:00 AM
You have a golden title! It's a great description of just how wide and endless the sky is. It makes me think of redwood forest trees (though I'm not sure that was your intention). Beautiful triolet! You are a man of many forms...
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Date: 4/10/2013 2:58:00 PM
GREAT line about the tree crawling up to azure heights. Love when you use lines like that one!
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Date: 4/10/2013 10:59:00 AM
lovely write Russell, always.. luv Linda
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Date: 4/10/2013 10:35:00 AM
Uplifting!
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Date: 4/10/2013 9:37:00 AM
Not familiar with this form...but I really like the poem. The repeated lines give the reader pause to learn more. Very good write my friend !!
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