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Autumnal Fog

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Autumnal Fog

The young gray cloud's above the field; 
it's running with the playing wind; 
a mistle falls with scents revealed, 
of ferns that mix with sage and mint. 

The field around, transmits my love; 
rescinds my soul's wrought iron bars, 
the southern breeze unfurls to rove; 
its flight shall reach the distant stars. 

My friends transcribed inside time's log
are clouds elusive and rain's dew; 
about resides Autumnal fog,
that spreads for me and just a few.

© G. V., 07-22-2012, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic Tetrameter)

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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 3:22:00 PM
    Very formal Giorgio, very romantic

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 4:22:00 AM
    This is a real delight to read!! Absolutely my kind of a poem - a mistle falls with scents revealed, of ferns that mix with sage and mint"! Loved it!!!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 1:51:00 PM
    - Hello Giorgio. - This is truly a beautiful autumn poems. - Actually I'm not so fond of autumn ... all natural beauty dies .... - My last my poem is written after an old legend from, Greek Mythology ..... what surprises me is that no one has heard of this. "- The Weaver Arachene -" - Therefore I allow myself to ask you .... (?) - (If you have time to read it) .... - Wish you a nice weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Simply beautiful, Giorgio. You're moved by nature and have a keen eye for beauty. Coupled with your linguistic acumen explosive poetry results. I'm awed. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 3:36:00 PM
    Just beautiful! My favorite season is autumn. I love how the bright leaves show up against the gray sky on those foggy, cloudy days. You painted that picture perfectly with your words. Fantastic work, G!...Thank you for the great comments, once again. They are very much appreciated!

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 4:07:00 PM
    Such such beautiful verses spiced up so well ..I definitely add them to my list of favs..yep a favourite indeed-Kalispera : )

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Beautiful images and form Georgio!

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 7:12:00 PM
    This is beautiful. I really dig your poetry. And thank you for your comment, I'm glad you are my friend.. :) Cindy