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Autumn Tears

Shower of tears fell from autumn's cloudy sky Onto the canvas of leaves on the ground Silencing thus, the last gigglings of summer That sanctuary in the heat they had found! (C) Demetrios Trifiatis 02 October 2015

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/6/2015 1:03:00 PM

Great write my friend love the way you described the tears of Autumn Demetrios beautiful imagery cleverly written.

Michael Tor
Date: 10/6/2015 1:55:00 PM

Your thoughts bring joy my heart to enjoy your God inspired masterpieces that only you can share from all your experiences and joy brought forth from your lovely heart.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2015 1:23:00 PM

wow, I really like this short but poignant poem!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/6/2015 9:27:00 AM

Andrea, my dear, how lovely to see you again! Thank you for your precious comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2015 4:03:00 PM

absolutely beautifully penned Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/4/2015 11:32:00 AM

Jan, my dear, thank you so very much!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/2/2015 5:04:00 PM

An amazing piece Demetrios. I love the flow of your write especially your subject. I love nature. An a fascinating write..........A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/4/2015 11:33:00 AM

A.M., so kind of you to visit and comment plus for your love for nature! I will be visiting!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 10/2/2015 2:41:00 PM

Lovely write Demetrios! I want to hear giggling year round : ) Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/4/2015 11:35:00 AM

Cecilia, my dear, so wonderful to see you visiting me. In Greece the summer was too hot. Happy not to hear the "giggling" that much! Thank you! I will be visiting!

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/2/2015 12:30:00 PM

Beautiful expression highlighting the changes of season. Well done my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/4/2015 11:36:00 AM

Thank you, BLD, for your delightful visit and comment! I will be visiting you!

Miraj Raha

Date: 10/2/2015 9:20:00 AM

Another excellent capture Sir,Summer is so revered in your parts of the country,but in my place we are suffering from the long and humid patches of heat wave.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/4/2015 11:39:00 AM

Once summer was my season, now I dread it for it is too hot! We spent more than two months between 35-40 Celsius. Thank you for your precious visit and comment! Was very busy. I will be visiting you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2015 4:19:00 AM

- Beautiful, I could shed some tears me too .... I'm never ready to say goodbye to summer :) - (7) - This year we have had a short summer, not so good weather - (have read the comments, do not like it ) - I wish you a lovely October day, dear Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/2/2015 7:49:00 AM

My sunshine friend, Anne Lise, thank you for your precious visit, gallant comment and generous grading! God bless you! Hugs. As far as the comments you are referring to, who does? Have a wonderful weekend!