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Autumn Shades

Colors fading out “Old we’re both” my garden says Gone is October Leaves now pallid, then calx Leprous and frothing each day.
+++++ My birth day falls on 30th September

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/7/2013 4:05:00 PM
I like this one too, and now I remember you are a Libra!!
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Date: 11/4/2013 8:13:00 AM
A belated Happy Birthday to you Dr. Ram.
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Date: 11/4/2013 7:36:00 AM
This is brilliant especially the closing lines.
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Date: 11/4/2013 7:21:00 AM
A lovely description of autumn shades. Best wishes Linda x
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Date: 11/4/2013 7:15:00 AM
well expressed Richard enjoyed very much Ty for your review on Men I have been ill so am far behind on answering remarks. Shadow x smile
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Date: 11/3/2013 10:15:00 PM
wow...Mostly i love the way the new got a lot going on.... enjoyed,,,LINDA
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Date: 11/3/2013 12:36:00 PM
wow...brilliantly penned tanka ...good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/3/2013 12:08:00 PM
A reflection of nature in human soul! Excellent painting!
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Date: 11/3/2013 9:09:00 AM
I like how you added yourself to the image! Well done and worth pondering.
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Date: 11/3/2013 9:05:00 AM
Strong & gripping imagery. It's good to read your work again!
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Date: 11/3/2013 5:54:00 AM
lovely imagery!
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