Autumn Rain

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AUTUMN RAIN

FROM MMY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 31 OCTOBER 2016, MY PICTURE, (c)

Falling Playing Singing Dancing Laughing Entertaining Embracing Caressing Kissing raindrops Cleansing Man's soul Reminding him to thank the heavens For The miracle of clouds’ tears of joy That Quench the thirst of earth's dreams After The merciless heat of partying summer! © Demetrios Trifiatis 31 October 2016

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Anu Nayak

Date: 10/31/2016 11:50:00 AM

Dear Demetrios, my wise man...this is wonderful !!! there is cleansing and bliss here !a 7 for this nugget ! lovely presentation and lovely click of rose:) //love,Anu:

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/31/2016 7:41:00 PM

Thank you my noble, Anu for your wonderful comment and grading! You so generous with your appreciation!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/31/2016 8:50:00 AM

What a gorgeous piece and so beautifully formatted.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/31/2016 7:39:00 PM

Richard, my friend, how lovely your visit and comment are! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2016 8:32:00 AM

- Beautiful ... a thirst rose, need rain :) - hugs & 7 // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/31/2016 7:38:00 PM

Yes, it does, doesn't it? My dearest Anne-Lise, thank you for your precious visit!

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/31/2016 7:21:00 AM

Wonderful ... Lovely ... A beauty ... In continuation of the dew-dust on that mesmerizing rose ... the free poetry in a stunning pose ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/31/2016 7:37:00 PM

What a lovely comment dear, Probir! A poem in itself! Thank you!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 10/31/2016 1:59:00 AM

So beautifully described.....Its raining here right now....The much awaited north east monsoon has finally arrived...Thank you for sharing this...Beautiful rose ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/31/2016 7:35:00 PM

I am delighted to receive your visit and comment dear, Supraja! Thank you!