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Autumn Fire

Life embracing death in fire Orange red yellow and brown Moments hugging before departure A colour bonanza in sundown The oranges that you gave me The tomatoes that I gave you Nothing in fact in vain has been Look at them in the autumn hue Deep orange is the nature In fading sad summer leaves Dreams of the lingering life Autumn wool bleeds and weaves Crimson whispers of the cool wind Into the yellow red and brown Incites the autumn fire further Freedom fire in the town Starved of green I am in fall Even in transit I am in love With this green and yellow life And your lovely lifeful cup Glamour game of autumn fire Golden brown and yellow balls Colours of the laughing tear To greet lovely tiny footfalls ______________________________ 27/10/2016

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Date: 11/22/2016 8:39:00 PM
Hi Probhir, two things: i am colourblind and its summer here. Its strange to identify with winter and all ha ha Having said that you painted such a gentle picture and the last two lines are so sentimental. Nice write..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/22/2016 11:02:00 PM
Aww, thank you for knocking at the closed door and stepping in ... thanks again for reading and liking the 'autumn fire' ... winter is setting in here at Kolkata very leisurely ... it is very gentle here... we love it ... waiting for further nips ... let me know your reaction on reading my poems as and when you get time to drop by ...
Date: 10/29/2016 8:50:00 PM
Congratulation on your nice write!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/29/2016 9:08:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/28/2016 7:04:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your fine placement in the contest with your lovely 'Autumn Fire' poem. Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/28/2016 11:43:00 PM
Thank you for liking ...
Date: 10/28/2016 9:06:00 AM
Congrats to win on your colorful poem
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/28/2016 1:00:00 PM
Thank you ... I see it as more metaphoric than colourful ... the reader's judgement is of course more significant ...
Date: 10/27/2016 10:21:00 PM
Great colorful images. Congratulations and blessings.....Janis
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/28/2016 1:24:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/27/2016 8:55:00 AM
Well painted hues of words composing a superb portrait of Autumn dear Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/28/2016 1:28:00 AM
Thank you ... Thanks to your daily flowers too ...
Date: 10/27/2016 7:56:00 AM
Very beautifully penned, Probir:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/28/2016 1:28:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/27/2016 7:10:00 AM
A fave, Probir. I love the imagery! Agnes
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/27/2016 7:22:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/27/2016 6:15:00 AM
Very lovely Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/27/2016 7:23:00 AM
Thank you ...

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