Attraction

Flitting from blade to blade, is that a leaf I see- no,no a butterfly,happy and free.

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Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/22/2009 11:43:00 PM

Awesome!

Charlene Bird

Date: 7/20/2009 7:27:00 PM

Beautiful the butterflies are just like this verse of poetic lovliness.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 7/12/2009 12:22:00 AM

Nice surprise at the end. reminds me of Kilmer or Frost. I always enjoy entering your contests. Keep 'em coming, my man. Regards,Gerard.

Shannon O'Leary

Date: 7/11/2009 7:29:00 PM

I agree that is has a child-like quality. I like it! Good job! Thanks for sharing!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/11/2009 4:17:00 PM

This is special..I can see it in a book for children. BG

James Peranteau

Date: 7/11/2009 1:25:00 PM

Brian,...this is just wonderful,...your poetry here makes Jehovah's gifts to us all even so much more beautiful,...His awesome gift to us ,...poetry, and you for stiking that pen on this slip with such creativeness !! james Going in my Favs Sir !!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/11/2009 8:55:00 AM

Funny I started out doing a poem on a butterfly this morning and I was at a loss for words. You did it with so few words. Wonderful. God Bless Phyl

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/11/2009 7:23:00 AM

Another day brightener!! Loved this one too!!!

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/11/2009 12:56:00 AM

I love to watch butterflies sit on blades of grass flapping their wings...Raul