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The yellow scraps perform a thrill during fierce storms. The breeze turbine is a lofty pattern within local farms. Amazed, I can spot concussive impacts in the wet stones. Bursting a ball of fire to tackle to impel amply atones. A golden ovoid floats through unfathomable seas. In symbiosis, green clusters wave in the gentle breeze. Portentous obscurities better the mighty sweep. During this time, igniting was lit on cremated sheep. Misty areas are evolving naturally to be wildly small. Efficient turbines humming, the trees shriek as well. The dappled shade of padded blossom subtly changed. A tentative mid-year sunset will have utterly emerged. Twirled, observing the shadow in youngster-like awe. A rare bird split a point worm and devoured him raw.
Written: November 15, 2021

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Date: 11/16/2021 5:18:00 AM
Your images paint the picture, Lasaad.
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Date: 11/16/2021 4:55:00 AM
Captivating, my dearest friend, Lasad! Blessings.
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Date: 11/16/2021 1:05:00 AM
Not an easy sonnet to write.
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