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Revive forth own verve By stating your swerve Extolled Height of straight, deserve You thrive and observe Withhold From the maelstrom, serve This wicked world's nerve Remold Show the strength you hold Your wings just unfold God cheers Fawning dazzling cold Peace and faith are gold Calm fears We are soft-built mold Bleak tales will be told Shed tears Thwart faults from past years When gray face appears Conserve Trawl wise warn from seers Gold rings in your ears. Subserve Life, precious gift dears From bright life, mind peers Preserve
Written: March 16, 2023 Virelai Form Write Me a Virelai Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 3/17/2023 12:41:00 PM
Forging poetry brings forth new forms, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Your pen is the hammer! Blessings.
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Date: 3/17/2023 6:17:00 AM
A cool form, Very nicely done Sotto
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Date: 3/17/2023 5:23:00 AM
Great advice in this poem--a person shines with unique qualities...
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Date: 3/17/2023 2:26:00 AM
A new form? Well constructed.
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