As Time Goes By

~As Time Goes By~ (Pantoum) So many things of my youth I could tell you now I was a lot younger and filled of so many dreams. There is nothing back then I thought I couldn’t do And the word 'impossible' was just foreign to me. I was a lot younger and filled of so many dreams And in them they were always castles and knights. And the word 'impossible' was just foreign to me My heart and soul just dance and sung in the sun. And in them they were always castles and knights There is nothing back then I thought I couldn’t do. My heart and soul just danced and sung in the sun So many things of my youth I could tell you now. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2008 November,13,2008

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/24/2016 12:51:00 PM

Lovely flow to the poem. In youth nothing seems impossible and we dream big dreams. love phyl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/25/2016 11:31:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly,Phyl, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 11/15/2008 6:47:00 AM

Lovely PANTOUM with super flow and word use! Well done!! Keith

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/14/2016 1:33:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Keith, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/13/2008 4:44:00 AM

How easy to relate to. Youth is so fleeting, as is life in general. Yes, castles and knights and Cinderlla dreams. A lovely write. Love, Shar

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/14/2016 1:34:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Sharon, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D