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As the Clock of War Is Ticking

AS THE CLOCK OF WAR IS TICKING (Let us do whatever we can to stop it!) As the clock of war is ticking Broader the smiles of death become Cause the untimely passing away of souls is thinking Onto the oblivion’s horrific land! © Demetrios Trifiatis 02 SEPTEMBER 2013

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/4/2013 8:40:00 PM

The clock of WAR is ticking. In a WAR everyone suffers. I think that all we can do is pray. Thanks for sharing... Lucy

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/5/2013 2:38:00 AM

Thank you, Lucy.

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/2/2013 6:21:00 PM

Though chemical warfare is despicable, by retaliating, we are just creating MORE death and destruction... THEN where does it end? Your words are ominous dear friend!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/3/2013 12:02:00 AM

If history has taught us something is that wars cause other wars! Hope one day men would find a better way to resolve their differences than killing one-another ! Thank you my friend!

Donna Jones

Date: 9/2/2013 3:49:00 PM

Yes...how far will it spread? Such a powerful thought Demetrios...may God keep us all in His care...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/2/2013 4:18:00 PM

Donna, let us hope not very far but since war is like the braking of a wild fire, you never know how far is going to spread! Thank you!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/2/2013 6:01:00 AM

I enjoyed the poem

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/2/2013 11:13:00 AM

And I have enjoyed yours! Thank you!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/2/2013 5:50:00 AM

Time keeps on slipping, slipping, slipping, into the future! Written and sang by Steve Miller band, this phrase explains your poem somewhat, however we are slipping into war within the future! I really love reading your incredible write this morning! What a powerful piece you have written Demetrios! Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/2/2013 11:09:00 AM

I know not the song but I understand the feeling! Thank you Russell for your good words!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/2/2013 4:23:00 AM

Yes, my dear poet...Yes....Sad thoughts...the ticking is infuriating....Heaven help us!

Donna Jones
Date: 9/2/2013 3:52:00 PM

My prayers and arms are especially out to you my sweet and your family and all soup family affected by these trying days

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/2/2013 11:12:00 AM

I am so sorry dearest Eilleen for you being in harms way. We all should be close to you in spirit for no-one would like to be so close to the fire line! I for one will keep praying and writing for peace. May the Good Lord inspire those in power, from all sides, to do what is right and not to harm the innocent or anyone for the matter!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2013 3:12:00 AM

- Yes, it really is ticking !!! - Well written, Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/2/2013 11:08:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend for your comment and your support for peace!