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As She Slips Away

When you're sitting there alone, Surrounded by your blades, All that's going through your mind, How many pills will it take? Before you start to slip away, Before your heart begins to fade, Before it takes the pain away, Will they find your body today? You think that no one cares, There's that boy whose always there, But there's nothing he can do, He’s scared what will happen if… You start to slip away, When your heart begins to fade, When he starts to feel your pain, Will he use those blades today? Still tonight is your night, You’ll leave it all behind, Write them each a letter, Telling them all why... You have to slip away, Why your heart now must fade, Why you felt all that pain, Why was it today? Your mother now feels the pain, Your brother's using your blades, Your father is not the same, And that boy, what can I say? He wants to slip away, He's no heart left to fade, He can’t take this pain, He is joining you today....

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Date: 1/28/2016 10:48:00 AM
WILL, HOPE TO SEE YOU BACK THIS YEAR..2016
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Date: 3/8/2014 2:15:00 PM
Will,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/3/2014 10:55:00 AM
How good as a write...yet how sad. // paul
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Date: 3/3/2014 5:09:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Will :) - I choose your first touching written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/2/2014 11:03:00 PM
a heart felt poem, Will , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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