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As Pure As Possible

Help me, oh Lord, The soul you have entrusted me with, As pure as possible to Thee, With My last breath, to surrender! © Demetrios Trifiatis 10 March 2015

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/9/2018 3:46:00 PM

Such a joyous invocation, Mr. D. May we all have the same spirit of devotion this splendid poem expresses. Love and joy always.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/4/2015 10:46:00 AM

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/1/2015 7:03:00 AM

Perfect! A Fav!

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/1/2015 6:09:00 AM

A personal plea, but a gentle reminder to us your readers. Each time I visit your page and discover more of your writes, I feel like I'm reading an extension of the Bible. Have a good day, sire. :) KIM

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/11/2015 9:48:00 AM

With final breath ushered into paradise, that would truly take your breath away!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/11/2015 1:15:00 PM

Yes, my friend, Richard! Till then let us imitate Christ in the degree we are able to! Thank you so much!

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/11/2015 9:11:00 AM

POWERFUL!!! But I wouldn't expect anything else! As Dave said, "you have a gift!" Have yourself a great day my friend!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/11/2015 1:11:00 PM

What a delightful sight to see you visiting my friend, Jack! Thank God you are alright! You so graceful with your comment my friend and I thank you for visiting and commenting!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/11/2015 3:46:00 AM

- Deep, powerful and lovely prayer from your heart dear friend Demetrios - I wish you a great day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/11/2015 6:26:00 AM

We should all pray so as a better world to build that will be to HIS liking, dear Anne-Lise! Thank you for your lovely visit and comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2015 3:41:00 PM

beautifully penned Demetrios - makes me think of my dad:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/10/2015 3:47:00 PM

Certain am I, your father has achieved to deliver a beautiful and untarnished soul, my dear friend, Jan! Thank you for your lovely visit and generous grading!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/10/2015 1:58:00 PM

A beautiful, heartfelt prayer, Demetrios...I hope you don't mind if I borrow it...going to my faves...hugs, Rhonda

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/10/2015 3:44:00 PM

MIND?? On the contrary, I am delighted in the thought you might... borrow it! Thank you, dear Rhonda for your kind visit and precious comment!

Tim Smith

Date: 3/10/2015 1:38:00 PM

A powerful prayer....you seem to be doing alright as far as I can see.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/10/2015 1:41:00 PM

Only He knows my friend, Tim, certain it is I am trying! Thank you for your visit and comforting comment!

Poesy Relish

Date: 3/10/2015 11:08:00 AM

All unto the Almighty.. nice pen Demetrios.... nad

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/10/2015 12:04:00 PM

Thank you P.R., for your gracious visit and comment!

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/10/2015 11:01:00 AM

Your words gave us a glimpse of your heart and peak at your soul. Emile. #7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/10/2015 12:06:00 PM

A soul has a glimpse of another one only when the same qualities share, dear friend, Emile! Thank you for your precious comment!

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/10/2015 8:42:00 AM

Such a lovely message to absorb. I will take it to heart, Demetrios. hugs, Kimberly xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/10/2015 9:14:00 AM

Kimberly, my dear new friend, thank you for your warm visit and comment! Hugs xo