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Around His Happy

She bent her light around his happy A symphonic complicency Illuminating their velocity He radiated her in semicircular lines She his rainbow in a night sky Uncontainable so he let her fly He flew with her for a time His notes traveling along her breeze Harmonizing within those upper keys He marveled at her lovely Grasped at the edges of her infinity Felt blessed by her fluidity Yet her light travels to fast His to hold only for a time Eventually light travels a straight line The essence of her in moon lit sky With angel wings she makes her flight Around his happy she bent her light Dedicated to Bernard Colasurdo after rereading the poem he wrote for his wife titled "A Love Letter"

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Lynn Marie

Date: 8/20/2016 4:49:00 PM

Wow...so beautiful..a most endearing "dedication" penned with obvious heart.. inspired by an enduring love. Your words have a lovely lyrical feel which increases the harmony and "two peas in a pod" emotions that are joyfully "dancing" about.:-) Your glorious poem gives hope of what "commitment" truly feels like, for those of us still wondering if it really exists. It is truly my pleasure to read such eloquent writing. blessings to all, lynn I will now read your friend's poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/20/2016 6:41:00 PM

Thanks for reading one of my older ones. Hugs Rick.

BE Bailey

Date: 10/23/2014 8:53:00 AM

Beautiful Richard!!!! "B"

Bernard Colasurdo

Date: 12/11/2013 11:26:00 PM

Hello Rick My friend, I am honored and blessed by your beautiful heart. Your words dedicated to the love Maria and I shared has touched my heart deeply. I can visualize your amazing poetry so vividly, I feel like im watching a fairytale. Thank You! Thank You! look for soup mail tomorrow

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2013 7:18:00 AM

I'm so glad you have been blessed by these words. Your poem and story has touched me deeply and these words are my hearts response. I look forward to your soup mail.

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 12/11/2013 8:02:00 AM

Great choice of words which you executed and expertly crafted. This was a pleasure to read :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/11/2013 8:08:00 AM

Thanks so glad you enjoyed it.

Donna Jones

Date: 12/5/2013 10:49:00 PM

Almost like an old song..just beautiful Rick..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2013 8:23:00 AM

Good morning and thanks Donna, hugs Rick.

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/5/2013 9:49:00 AM

Tremendous clarity in these lines. The adoration & warmth embedded in this poem are without limits. Very touching lines.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/5/2013 10:05:00 AM

Thanks Drake! I hope you are enjoying a splendid Califoria day.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/5/2013 7:52:00 AM

Celestial.......Ethereal.....Lovely. Loved ones never really leave us. Their memories always light the way for us. Beautiful beautiful poem from you, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/5/2013 8:06:00 AM

Good morning Eileen, Bernard's is a beautiful love story that will one day end and begin with a reunion dance just beyond heavens gate.